Elizabeth Tammi On Making Mythology Your Own

Inspiration is a funny thing. It can come to us like a lightning bolt, through the lyrics of a song, or in the fog of a dream. Ask any writer where their stories come from and you’ll get a myriad of answers, and in that vein I created the WHAT (What the Hell Are you Thinking?) interview. Always including in the WHAT is one random question to really dig down into the interviewees mind, and probably supply some illumination into my own as well.

Today's guest for the WHAT is Elizabeth Tammi. California-born and Florida-grown, she's currently in Georgia at Mercer University as a Stamps scholar. Her debut, Outrun the Wind, releases November 27.

Ideas for our books can come from just about anywhere, and sometimes even we can’t pinpoint exactly how or why. Did you have a specific origin point for your book?

As long as I can remember, I’ve been fascinated with Greek mythology and history. I was a huge fan of Rick Riordan’s Percy Jackson stories, but even before reading them, I was intrigued by the mayhem and magic of the Greek pantheon and heroes. Though I’d heard the name ‘Atalanta’ in passing many times, it wasn’t until I was 18 that I actually read a detailed account of her story, and it didn’t sit well with me. I was impressed and captivated by Atalanta herself, but so much of her story made zero sense to me. Why would she kill the men she raced? Why did her father really bring her back home?

Questions piled up, and weeks later, she hadn’t left me alone. I started inventing my own answers and adding new characters (while shifting and altering plenty aspects of her myth) until it made sense to me personally. I also took the opportunity to answer other questions I’d always harbored about Greek myths, like the true nature of serving as one of the goddess Artemis’s huntresses, and how being an Oracle at Delphi might actually affect a girl. In short, things that had long bothered me about Greek mythology finally got their resolution through this book. It was inspired purely out of my own spite and confusion.

Once the original concept existed, how did you build a plot around it?

I first allowed myself to take immense liberties in changing aspects of the story of Atalanta. When retelling an old story, I think I hesitated at first to find the balance between respecting the origins and writing my own tale. It’s a tricky boundary, but I focused on creating new, original characters that could serve both as their own people, while also heightening certain aspects of the original myth. I used a few general timeline points from Atalanta’s original mythology as plot guides, and filled in the blanks between with scenes that I thought offered a new perspective on what was really happening with her, Kahina, and the other characters.

Have you ever had the plot firmly in place, only to find it changing as the story moved from your mind to paper?

To an extent, yes. I’m a pretty big believer in extensive planning and plotting prior to drafting, but I’ve certainly had far too many instances where I’ll realize that I’ve just written myself into a logistical plothole nightmare. I think most authors have been there. I do my best to avoid that, and there’s been instances where characters will ‘take the wheel’, and say or do something that alters a scene slightly. But for the most part, I tend to outline extensively so I hesitate less as drafting.

Do story ideas come to you often, or is fresh material hard to come by?

Flashes of concepts and aesthetics come to me frequently, but fully-fleshed ideas are rare for me. Outrun the Wind sometimes feels a bit like cheating, because while I definitely completely reimagined Atalanta’s story, there’s still a lot inspired by the original mythology. On other stories I’ve written and am writing, I’ve had to try a lot harder to create thorough, smooth plots. I’ve found if I can come up with at least a handful of characters and a main dilemma, I can usually ‘snowball’ my way into a full story. It just takes a lot of mental energy! Stories don’t really drop on me. I have to fight for them to become defined.

How do you choose which story to write next, if you’ve got more than one percolating?

I’ll sit down and write out, by hand, as much of the plot of each story that I have planned out. Whichever one is more fleshed out and thorough is the one that’s ready to move onto the drafting stage.

I usually have at least one or two cats snuggling with me when I write. Do you have a writing buddy, or do you find it distracting?

I’m far too easily distracted even when I’m just by myself, unfortunately. I’m in college as well, so no pets for me right now. I have a dog I adore back home with my parents, but she’s too cute for me to focus on writing, haha! I’ve found I can’t even listen to music while writing. If I’m editing, music is fine, but especially when drafting, I just need to be alone and preferably with a caffeinated beverage on hand. So yeah, maybe my writing buddy is a caramel latte?

Karol Ruth Silverstein on Drawing From Personal Experiences for Fiction

Inspiration is a funny thing. It can come to us like a lightning bolt, through the lyrics of a song, or in the fog of a dream. Ask any writer where their stories come from and you’ll get a myriad of answers, and in that vein I created the WHAT (What the Hell Are you Thinking?) interview. Always including in the WHAT is one random question to really dig down into the interviewees mind, and probably supply some illumination into my own as well.

Today's guest for the WHAT is Karol Ruth Silverstein, author of Cursed, releasing 6/25/19, which  is loosely drawn from her experiences following being diagnosed with a chronic illness at the age of thirteen.

Ideas for our books can come from just about anywhere, and sometimes even we can’t pinpoint exactly how or why. Did you have a specific origin point for your book?

I did. It all started with a suggestion from a screenwriting mentor, Holly Goldberg Sloan, way back in the early 90s. I have an obvious/visible disability, so it’s very natural for people to wonder about that when they meet me. As Holly and I were first getting to know each other, I told her about being diagnosed with a painful chronic illness at thirteen and what a struggle it was to navigate that drastic shift in my reality, especially in the beginning. She encouraged me to write about that experience, but I was resistant for a variety of reasons—the most significant of which was that I wasn’t sure how to tell the story in a way that was authentic to my experience. Much of what I’d seen and read involving sick kids seemed to adhere to some unwritten rule that said these characters needed to be indefatigable little soldiers whose bravery and pluck inspired everyone around them. That definitely wasn’t me!

It wasn’t until years later, while doing an exercise in a writing workshop, that I discovered the voice of my main character Ricky (short for Erica). She was snarky, self-absorbed, terrified and pissed off—which was basically how I felt when I was first diagnosed. With Ricky, I’d finally found my way in.

Once the original concept existed, how did you build a plot around it?

I must confess: despite being a total “plotser,” with Cursed I just wrote whatever scene came to my mind, whatever needed or wanted to be written at that moment. I wrote the whole novel out of sequence, with no outline/treatment beyond knowing who my main character was, what had happened to her and how she felt about it and that the story took place during the school year. It was utter and complete MADNESS! Plus, it took FOREVER. My advice: don’t do this! Unless you must, unless you’re writing something that demands to written this way for whatever reasons. Then—have at it.

After I’d written hundreds of scenes, I figured I’d better start thinking about plot. Coming from a screenwriting background, I had a basic sense of how my character’s journey should proceed. I looked at all of my scenes and began rearranging them so that the story slowly started to make sense and then I made notes in the manuscript where bridges were needed between scenes. Eventually I had a linear plot, but I still had a lot of work to do!

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Have you ever had the plot firmly in place, only to find it changing as the story moved from your mind to paper?

I’ve definitely experienced this between drafts in many other projects, if not between head and computer. In one of my screenplays, I decided to add a completely new, surprise/twist ending a few drafts in. Suddenly, I was writing The Sixth Sense and had to go back through the script and put in little clues and Easter eggs—without tipping my hat too much—so that when the twist came at the end, it made sense.

In Cursed, lots of plot points changed after I got my first editorial letter, if not the overall plot itself. For one, my editor had me age my main character up, from thirteen to fourteen. That ended up having a ripple effect on the whole story—and actually changed what my character ultimately wanted and needed too. Many scenes were rearranged, consolidated, trimmed or deleted. New scenes were added. I ended up being really happy with many of the changes.

Do story ideas come to you often, or is fresh material hard to come by?

Yes and no. Some stories have popped into my head nearly fully formed, particularly ideas for picture book manuscripts. (Perfecting a picture book manuscript is a whole different story though). But in addition to being a “ploster,” I’m also a reviser. So while I have some writer friends who have dozens of first drafts sitting on their computers, I tend to have a smaller volume of projects but they’ve all been revised numerous times. Does that indicate a lack of new ideas or a dedication to my works-already-in-progress? I’m not sure. I do remember doing a writing exercise once where the task was to write down fifty story ideas. I think I used every story idea I’d ever had, however vague, and still only got about half way there!

How do you choose which story to write next, if you’ve got more than one percolating?

There are always lots of stories percolating in my brain, and I generally work on multiple projects at once. It’s just how I roll. If I get stuck or feel uninspired on one, I can shift focus to another while a few of my brain cells continue to work on the issue with the first project.

Now that my novel has moved onto the copyediting phase, what I work on next has to do with my goal of being on submission with one or two projects by the end of the year. I discussed this goal with my agent, and we decided I should focus on a picture book of mine that needs a little polishing. So I’ll be working on that manuscript and then will move on to revising another novel (that, alas, need a good bit more that a polish). But I love revising, remember? Writing a screenplay adaptation of my novel is also in my near future—in case Hollywood comes calling!

I usually have at least one or two cats snuggling with me when I write. Do you have a writing buddy, or do you find it distracting?

I wish I could convince my cats to snuggle with me while I write! They only seem interested in lying near or on my keyboard so that I’ll pet them instead of typing. Sigh.

Much of my writing time is spent in blissful solitude, though I currently get together with a small group of children’s book authors every Monday and write all day at a bakery/coffee shop. We do a good job of keeping our noses to the grindstone, with minimal chatting except for when we break for lunch. Mondays are always very productive! I also have had lots of critique buddies over the years. Running everything I write by another writer—whether for significant feedback or a just few polishing notes—is an absolute necessity for me. My current/long-time go-to critique buddy (we are each other’s “secret weapon”) will even be reading my answers here!

Beth Kander On Choosing Which Story to Write Next

Inspiration is a funny thing. It can come to us like a lightning bolt, through the lyrics of a song, or in the fog of a dream. Ask any writer where their stories come from and you’ll get a myriad of answers, and in that vein I created the WHAT (What the Hell Are you Thinking?) interview. Always including in the WHAT is one random question to really dig down into the interviewees mind, and probably supply some illumination into my own as well.

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Today's guest for the WHAT is Beth Kander who lives and writes in Chicago, where stories keep her warm. Her dystopian epic Original Syn debuted in September from Owl House Books. An award-winning playwright, Beth has an MFA in Creative Writing from Mississippi University for Women, and also holds degrees from Brandeis University and the University of Michigan.

Ideas for our books can come from just about anywhere, and sometimes even we can’t pinpoint exactly how or why. Did you have a specific origin point for your book?

It’s rare that I have such a clear starting point for any writing project, but I really can pinpoint the exact moment when the whole Original Syn journey began. I was on an airplane in the spring of 2011, and a passenger had left their tattered copy of Time magazine behind. Half-stoned on all the Dramamine I have to take to keep motion sickness at bay, I read an article about the impending “Singularity,” the event horizon when man and machine merge.

I was struck by how casually the author’s article, Lev Grossman, approached the whole idea that, as he put it: “[Computers will be] writing books, making ethical decisions, appreciating fancy paintings, making witty observations at cocktail parties… we’ll merge with them and become super-intelligent cyborgs.” He estimated this happening in 2045, or sooner. In our lifetimes. I was terrified at the thought, and started wondering what the world would look like after this happened, especially if the tech was denied to those of us who aren’t mega-rich. Somehow I thought I could write an epic trilogy exploring the fallout of such a thing. I blame the Dramamine.

Once the original concept existed, how did you build a plot around it?

I think the most interesting stories explore different angles: X event happened; Character(s) A went one way, Character(s) B went another, and now as Y event approaches…. ugh, wait, that sounds a lot like math. Math is much cleaner than my writing process. Let me try again. How did I build a plot around the original concept? I came up with some main characters, and wrote out an arc for each of them, then started tangling them together, and then Frankenstein’ed a really weird first draft… and then did a hell of a lot of revising.

Have you ever had the plot firmly in place, only to find it changing as the story moved from your mind to paper?

UM YES. You know that meme about how people think success looks like a straight line from Starting Point to Success, but what it really looks like is Starting Point, EXTREMELY TANGLED BALL OF YARN, Success? Writing is like that for me, except sometimes with like six thousand balls of multicolored extra-tangle-y yarn.

Do story ideas come to you often, or is fresh material hard to come by?

Constantly. Story ideas slam into me constantly. I have slips of paper and emailed notes and voicemails I left myself back in 2008. I have a running list of works-in-progress, and I have serious guilt about some of the languishing ones.

How do you choose which story to write next, if you’ve got more than one percolating?

When there’s an external deadline—a big playwriting competition I want to enter, say, or the publisher has a hard-and-fast deadline for my next round of revisions—that’s helpful. Otherwise it’s usually this weird but wonderful pattern where one of the ideas rises up from my list of works-in-progress and yells louder than the rest. The squeakiest mental wheel then gets the grease, at least until I’m handed a new deadline or something else clamors more loudly. Once I was literally two chapters away from finishing a book project, then had an idea for a play that gripped me hard and wouldn’t let go, so I cranked out an entire first draft of the play over the course of a weekend, so it would quiet down and I could return to those last two chapters of the abruptly neglected novel.

I have six cats. There's usually at least one or two snuggling with me when I write. Do you have a writing buddy, or do you find it distracting?

Six! Cats! Six—?! I’d seen several pictures of your cats but assumed it was just two or three moving around a lot! 

I love the idea of writing buddies. I’ve been part of various writing groups over the years, but I’m not currently part of any regularly-assembling writer posse. I might join or start one again, someday; I do like the solidarity and peer pressure of other writers sitting nearby tapping away at their keyboards. Right now, what I do have includes two geriatric dogs who bark at imagined enemies (either that, or my house is haunted and they are very good about keeping the ghosts at bay), an engaging and exhaustingly extroverted husband (he really can talk to a stick), a bubbly almost-two-old-daughter (she overthinks like me and over-verbalizes like her father... it’s intense, y’all), and a day job. Does it make me sound awful to admit that when I can slip away and be alone with my computer and a massive mug of coffee, free of my loudly beautiful daily distractions, these days that’s often when I get my best writing done?