Michelle Knudsen on Crafting A Sequel

Inspiration is a funny thing. It can come to us like a lightning bolt, through the lyrics of a song, or in the fog of a dream. Ask writers where their stories come from and you’ll get a myriad of answers. In that vein I created the WHAT (What the Hell Are you Thinking?) interview. Always including in the WHAT is one random question to really dig down into the interviewees mind, and probably supply some illumination into my own as well.

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Today's guest for the blog is Michelle Knudsen, New York Times best-selling author of 45 books for young readers, including board books, picture books, early readers, and middle grade and young adult novels. Her best-known book to date is the award-winning picture book Library Lion, which was selected by Time Magazine as one of the Best 100 Children's Books of All Time.

Her most recent picture book is Marilyn's Monster (Candlewick, March 2015), illustrated by the wonderful Matt Phelan. Next up is the YA sequel REVENGE OF THE EVIL LIBRARIAN, coming on Valentine's Day 2017. Michelle also works as a freelance editor and writing teacher, and is a member of the Writing for Young People MFA faculty at Lesley University.

Ideas for our books can come from just about anywhere, and sometimes even we can’t pinpoint exactly how or why. Did you have a specific origin point for your book?

Sort of? :)  I started Evil Librarian while I was working on another, darker novel and needed a break. I wanted to work on something fun, and really just started writing without much of an idea of where the story was going. Mostly I had a vague idea of a romance with a supernatural element, and I had the voice of the main character, Cyn. I didn't even know there was going to be a librarian until Annie (Cyn's best friend) suddenly mentioned him in the first chapter. I wrote along for about 80 pages, just having fun, until I finally had to stop and figure out what the book was really about and where it was all going to go.

For book two, I knew going in that I'd be setting most of the story at theater camp, which I was extra excited about since I went to theater camp myself for years during junior high and high school and loved it. It felt like a great way to put Cyn and her friends in a different environment and to give them some new challenges to face. I also knew I wanted to work in The Scarlet Pimpernel as one of the story's musicals, and that was a lot of fun for me -- I love that show!

Once the original concept existed, how did you build a plot around it?

With the first book, as I mentioned above, I wrote a fair amount before stopping to try and figure out more of the plot. That's often how it works for me with a new novel -- I need to get to know the characters and the feel of the story before I can determine the shape of the plot and all the elements I want to include. I'm pretty sure that at one point when I felt stuck, I made an actual list called "Things That Need to Happen in This Book" and then spent some time figuring out how I was going to get to those moments in the story.

For the second book, I already knew most of the characters, and so I was able to start plotting much sooner. I don't want to mention any spoilers, but I can say that there were certain dangers I wanted to include in the story, and a certain new character I wanted to introduce, and I worked a lot of the initial plot around those things. I also knew that Cyn was going to have to deal with the secrets she'd decided to keep in the first book, and that doing so would not be easy.

Have you ever had the plot firmly in place, only to find it changing as the story moved from your mind to paper?

I never have the plot firmly in place. :)  I mean, not until after the first couple of drafts, at least. Nowadays I do like to start with some kind of outline, but I always know it's just a rough plan. So much of what matters happens during the actual writing, and if I tried to force myself to stick to a preplanned plotline, I'd never stumble upon what invariably ends up being some of the best parts of the story. Sometimes I am really surprised by where the story goes, though. In my book The Princess of Trelian (book two of my Trelian fantasy trilogy), I had no idea the story would end the way it did when I first starting planning. It was completely different (and far more shocking!) than what I'd originally had in mind.

Do story ideas come to you often, or is fresh material hard to come by?

Bits and pieces of ideas come to me all the time. The hard part is recognizing which ones have real potential to become a good story, and then figuring out how to coax the early sparks of idea along until the story catches fire.

How do you choose which story to write next, if you’ve got more than one percolating?

I'm often working on more than one book at a time. If I'm on a deadline for a particular book, then I (eventually) have to put everything else aside and focus on that. But otherwise I might go back and forth between a few ideas, trying to see which one grabs me the hardest. Once I'm deep into a novel it's difficult to switch to another one, although I am able to work on picture books and novels at the same time. Those are different enough that it doesn't feel like a conflict of creative energy.

I recently got stitches in my arm and was taking mental notes the entire time about how I felt before, during, and after the process of being badly injured. Do you have any major life events that you chronicled mentally to mine for possible writing purposes later?

My most devastating romantic heartbreaks fall into that category ... I think it's a coping mechanism. I tell myself at the time that the more it hurts, the better it will make some future story somewhere down the line. (It doesn't really help me feel better in the moment, but at least I can believe that all the pain is going to be worth something eventually.) I also find myself paying attention to new landscapes and natural spaces for use in future books. I remember trying to lock down the feeling of being deep in a forest, noticing how close the trees grow together and how easy it can be to lose track of where you are if you stray from the path. I also tried to hold on to the feeling of climbing rocks (and to the realization that I'm a little afraid of heights) on a recent trip to Arizona. Some details of physical setting are definitely easier to recreate if you've actually experienced them in real life.

Tiffany D. Jackson On The Inspiration for ALLEGEDLY

Inspiration is a funny thing. It can come to us like a lightning bolt, through the lyrics of a song, or in the fog of a dream. Ask writers where their stories come from and you’ll get a myriad of answers. In that vein I created the WHAT (What the Hell Are you Thinking?) interview. Always including in the WHAT is one random question to really dig down into the interviewees mind, and probably supply some illumination into my own as well.

Today's guest for the WHAT is Tiffany D. Jackson, whose debut ALLEGEDLY drops today from Katherine Tegen Books. Tiffany is a TV professional by day, novelist by night, awkward black girl 24/7. She received her Bachelor of Arts in Film from Howard University and her Master of Arts in Media Studies from The New School University.

Ideas for our books can come from just about anywhere, and sometimes even we can’t pinpoint exactly how or why. Did you have a specific origin point for your book?

First time insomnia worked in my favor! LOL! I was up late one night, cruising the internet when I came across this story on People.com of a nine-year-old girl charged with murder. I was blown away and couldn’t stop thinking, “What if she didn’t do it?”

Once the original concept existed, how did you build a plot around it?

Thanks to Hurricane Sandy, I had a week off from work and wrote the entire first draft of the novel in a week! There were huge plot holes and missing back story but the story just poured out of me. I then stepped back to strategically do research and start conceptualizing how to add in the excerpts. 

Have you ever had the plot firmly in place, only to find it changing as the story moved from your mind to paper?

Of course! The original ending of ALLEGEDLY was completely different in my head. By the fourth or fifth review of my draft, with plot holes plugged and backstory layered in, I had a sudden epiphany in the shower one morning that turned the entire book upside down. 

Do story ideas come to you often, or is fresh material hard to come by?

I have about approximately five books in my head right now. Sometimes I start thinking of dialog for the next book before the one before it is done. I rely heavily on my “Notes” app when inspiration strikes at random, so I don’t forget scenes dancing through my skull and am constantly telling characters to wait their turn when they start talking. I’m officially the crazy dog lady on my block. 

How do you choose which story to write next, if you’ve got more than one percolating?

Whatever story has the most notes in my phone that’s the story I go with. 

I recently got stitches in my arm and was taking mental notes the entire time about how I felt before, during, and after the process of being badly injured. Do you have any major life events that you chronicled mentally to mine for possible writing purposes later?

I remember every moment of my Grandmother dying. I remember the feeling when I got the call that she was about to pass, the anxiety of trying to get to her hospice, the look on her face as she struggled, the way the room smelled, the color of her blanket as I laid beside her, the sounds of her last breath, the voices around me telling her it was ok to let go, then the unimaginable agony when she finally did. When I write hard, gut wrenching scenes of pain, I always pull from that.

Gail Nall On Finding Inspiration In Your Obsessions

Inspiration is a funny thing. It can come to us like a lightning bolt, through the lyrics of a song, or in the fog of a dream. Ask any writer where their stories come from and you’ll get a myriad of answers, and in that vein I created the WHAT (What the Hell Are you Thinking?) interview. Always including in the WHAT is one random question to really dig down into the interviewees mind, and probably supply some illumination into my own as well.

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Today's guest for the WHAT is Gail Nall, who lives in Louisville, Kentucky with her family and more cats than necessary. She once drove a Zamboni, has camped in the snow in June, and almost got trampled in Paris. Gail is the author of the middle grade novel, BREAKING THE ICE and the author of the young adult novel, EXIT STAGE LEFT. Another middle grade novel, OUT OF TUNE, releases TODAY from Aladdin/S&S!

Be sure to scroll down for the giveaway!

Ideas for our books can come from just about anywhere, and sometimes even we can’t pinpoint exactly how or why. Did you have a specific origin point for your book?

I did! I have a tiny (huge) obsession with reading travel blogs, and I kept running into blogs from families who lived on the road. As in, they sold everything and moved into an RV. With kids. And pets. I was fascinated, and I knew it was something I had to write about. As a parent, I totally get the motivation behind a decision like this, but as a twelve-year-old, I would've been horrified. And a horrified twelve-year-old always makes a great book.

Once the original concept existed, how did you build a plot around it?

Once I knew I was stuffing a family into an RV to travel the country, I needed a reason for Maya, my main character, to desperately want to get back home. This reason changed entirely from the first draft to the published version, which meant a lot of rewriting to turn Maya into an aspiring country singer who wants to audition for a reality singing show. Then I had to figure out all of the crazy stuff she was going to do to try to get back home and the obstacles that were going to stand in her way. And – the most fun for me – I had to decide where her family was traveling.

Have you ever had the plot firmly in place, only to find it changing as the story moved from your mind to paper?

Oh yeah, definitely! I rewrote the second half of this book twice before even showing it to my agent because I didn't like how the plot changed as I wrote it. The first version had Maya and company getting lost in the mountains instead of taking a long a bike ride. In my head, it was really light and funny, but as I wrote it, it got more serious (not enough food, wild animals, etc). So I ended up with a second half that didn't match the first half at all. Hello, rewriting!

Do story ideas come to you often, or is fresh material hard to come by?

I keep an ideas file on my computer, but usually I have anywhere from one to three ideas sitting in the back of my brain, demanding to be written. Of the three taking up space in my head right now, one came from a co-worker's unique experience (day jobs are great for inspiration!), one came from something I love to do, and one was inspired by a song.

How do you choose which story to write next, if you’ve got more than one percolating?

This is the hardest part. I write both MG and YA (and last winter, I even tossed a chapter book into the mix to keep things interesting), so it depends on which one I'm in the mood to write. But once I choose, I don't let myself work on another project, unless the other project is already in the publication process and needs attention rightthissecond. Once I decide MG or YA, I pick the project that appeals to me the most at the moment – the one I can see myself excited to get up and write at 5 a.m.

I recently got stitches in my arm and was taking mental notes the entire time about how I felt before, during, and after the process of being badly injured. Do you have any major life events that you chronicled mentally to mine for possible writing purposes later?

Ha, yes! I had a great scene in OUT OF TUNE with slugs attaching themselves to a frozen towel. That came from a real life experience when my washing machine died (while filled with sopping wet towels, of course). Let's just say I had no idea that many slugs lived in my backyard, and I had to Google “how to remove slugs from frozen towels.” (Spoiler alert: Google was unhelpful.) I ended up cutting that scene, but it still lives on my computer, hoping to fit into another book some day.