Writing in the WWI Era

by Hilary Hauck

Fiction set in World War Two is far more abundant than World War One. It’s to the point where a search for WWI stories on Amazon triggers a message asking if I meant WWII.

It makes sense. WWII offers endless opportunity for espionage, dazzling airborne battles, indelible scenes like the Normandy landings and the atrocities of concentration camps, not to mention a clear line between good and evil.

By contrast, the first thing that comes to mind for WWI are the trenches. Four solid years of bug-infested, disease-ridden, muddy ditches. A drawn out and brutal conflict.

Even the notable conflict firsts for WWI, such as the use of planes—mounted, no less, with the first machine guns—fail to ignite the pace, setting up, instead, a crude and clunky mood.

Before I stumbled upon the real-life inspiration for my debut historical novel, From Ashes to Song, I had been working on a story set in WWII. It seemed like a natural choice. Growing up in London in the Seventies, WWII was familiar. We studied it at school, it was the setting for movies and TV shows, entire museums were dedicated to it.

The impact on my family, too, was palpable. A photo of my mother’s cousin, Squadron Leader ‘Gus’, an RAF fighter pilot shot down in the war, hung in pride of place on my great aunt’s wall.

On my dad’s side, my grandmother, ‘Nan’, was the only survivor of a bomb that hit her family home during the Battle of Britain. She lost her entire family—her parents, her sister, and her first child, a daughter named Aileen. Nan, too, was badly wounded, losing a leg and most of the function in one of her arms.

Despite her physical limitations, Nan taught me to bake, to speak French, and to use a home computer—in the Eighties no less, when barely anyone owned a home computer. She was also the inspiration for the novel I was trying to write in the late Noughts, but I wasn’t getting far. In fact, the war era that had seemed so palpable in my formative years now seemed far off, I had inched closer to WWI.

This was because I had recently moved to rural Pennsylvania after living near Milan, Italy, during my twenties. It was not the America I’d seen in movies. Here, amid the WWI era buildings, an air of the town’s coal mining heyday still prevailed. And it wasn’t only the architecture. Everyone, it seemed, had a story to tell of their parents or grandparents who were, like me, ‘off the boat’.

In a way, I’d stumbled upon living history. It wasn’t long before I heard a story that gripped me and would not let go. It was Pietro’s story, told to me by his daughter, Irene Smylnycky. So I had a compelling story and I was surrounded by the memory of the people who’d built the area on a foundation of hope. It felt like it was meant to be.

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Luckily for me, Irene welcomed the idea of me writing her family’s story as fiction, and so I set aside my Nan’s story and went back in time. Instead of beginning in 1940 with the Luftwaffe roaring over London, my story now began in 1911 in the peaceful hills of north-west Italy. Pietro is trying his hand at composing for the first time, the grapevines stretching either side of him like lines of music. His world will be in flames shortly—not because of bombs, but on the orders of the Ministry to destroy the vineyard in an attempt to curb the spread of Phylloxera, a disease that will devastate all but a handful of vines around the world.

As Pietro starts anew in America, the landscape turns from green hills to black coal country. He finds work in the mine where his musician’s hands blister, the coal dust stifles his clarinetist’s breathe. It’s grim, cold, dirty.

Though I intentionally kept the war in the background because it must have felt a world away, the setting is similar to the bleak and brutal feel of WWI.

Against the dismal and trying backdrop, without the fury and immediacy of WWII, the characters personal stories could shine. They had a greater opportunity to orchestrate their own paths, or in Pietro’s case, his own symphony.

The pervasive nature of conflict in WWII lends itself to a much narrower stage of opportunity for characters to pilot their own paths. What’s more, those same seductive battles, landings, and atrocities are inescapable. Readers know the horrors that unfolded, so even when a story is one of hope, there can’t help but also be an air of grief.

And while nothing could compare to the horrors of the concentration camps and atrocities perpetrated against Jews, the WWI era is a chance to explore prejudice and discrimination. Even though on a very different scale with a much less devastating outcome, prejudice was much closer to home—in the mines, bars, even the churches—and perhaps because of that, more relatable.

What was once a thriving town with a deep sense of hope for the future is today a quiet town with a deep sense of pride in its origins. Ethnic backgrounds are a point of pride, not division. From this vantage point of 2021, an era of mass migration, that is a lesson worth revisiting.

Both World Wars are no doubt important, lest we forget. They offer ample opportunity to explore the stuff stories are made of—resilience, human strengths and failings, intolerance, what people are capable of in tenuous circumstances. I read WWII stories voraciously but would certainly like to see more stories crafted from the goldmine of 1910s stories still told at the family dinner table, before generations forget entirely how they came to be here. Instead of a re-direct, I’d welcome an ample choice of options when I search for WWI fiction—stories of immigrants, of sacrifice, change, and hope.

Hilary Hauck is the author of From Ashes to Song, her debut novel. A writer and translator, her work has appeared in the Mindful Writers Retreat Series anthologies, the Ekphrastic Review, Balloons Lit. Journal, and the Telepoem Booth. She moved to Italy from her native UK as a young adult, where she mastered the language, learned how to cook food she can no longer eat, and won a karate championship. After meeting her husband, Hilary came to the US and drew inspiration from Pennsylvania coal history, which soon became the setting for her debut novel. Hilary is Chair of the Festival of Books in the Alleghenies, past president of Pennwriters, and a graduate of RULE. She lives on a small patch of woods in rural Pennsylvania with her husband, one of their three adult children, a cat with a passion for laundry, and an oversized German Shepherd called Hobbes—of the Calvin variety. 

Author Heather Frese On Getting Close... But Not Quite When On Submission

If there's one thing that many aspiring writers have few clues about, it's the submission process. There are good reasons for that; authors aren't exactly encouraged to talk in detail about our own submission experiences, and - just like agent hunting - everyone's story is different. I managed to cobble together a few non-specific questions that some debut authors have agreed to answer (bless them). And so I bring you the submission interview series - Submission Hell - It's True. Yes, it's the SHIT.

Today’s guest for the SHIT is Heather Frese author of The Baddest Girl on The Planet, Heather Frese's fiction, essays, and poetry have appeared in Michigan Quarterly Review, The Los Angeles Review, Front Porch, The Barely South Review, Switchback, and elsewhere, earning notable mention in the Pushcart Prize Anthology and Best American Essays. She received her master's degree from Ohio University and her M.F.A. from West Virginia University

How much did you know about the submission process before you were out on subs yourself?

I thought I’d done a lot of research and really understood how the submission process worked. I went to panels at AWP about getting an agent for a novel and figured it would be fairly straightforward. I did get an agent, revised with him, and he sent the book to the big publishing houses. I got several close calls, but nothing stuck. As the initial manuscript submission process happened, I was going through a ton of life changes, getting married and moving and getting pregnant caring for a newborn, and I lost a lot of steam getting another novel ready for him to send out. I asked him if I could keep submitting The Baddest Girl on the Planet myself to small presses and contests and he said that was fine, so I switched to focusing on that, which is how the book eventually found a home.

Did anything about the process surprise you?

I was surprised by how much I didn’t know was going on when the book was going to big presses, and I was surprised by how long everything took.

Did you research the editors you knew had your ms? Do you recommend doing that?

When I had an agent sending it out, I didn’t research the editors. But when I was sending it myself to small presses and contests, I researched a lot and really targeted presses I thought would be a good fit. I’d definitely recommend researching contests to see if your book seems like it would be a good fit.

What was the average amount of time it took to hear back from editors?

Gosh, when it was out with the big houses, I think it was several weeks? A month? I can’t really remember. Contests took up to a year to hear back.

What do you think is the best way for an author out on submission to deal with the anxiety?

I dealt with it by moving about once a year and getting pregnant three times, which I do not recommend as a strategy, but it sure did keep my mind off of book things. I hear the best thing to do is work on a new project. I guess my new projects were babies, so maybe I adhered to that advice in a skewed way.

If you had any rejections, how did you deal with that emotionally? How did this kind of rejection compare to query rejections?

I went into it expecting the rejections, so the standard “no, thank you” sort of rolled off my back. What was harder to process were the close calls, the editors that really liked the book, just not quite enough to publish it for whatever reason. I had one time I was a semi-finalist in a contest and then didn’t advance to the finals, and that was hard. I’m not sure how I dealt with it. Just sort of processed through feeling like crap and then sending out again.

If you got feedback on a rejection, how did you process it? How do you compare processing an editor’s feedback as compared to a beta reader’s?

I did take it a bit more to heart when I got an editor’s feedback, particularly one who said they lost sympathy for the character at one point in the novel. I got enough close-but-no-cigar feedback to balance it out, though, and I also figured going in that the structure of my book was unusual and might not work editors looking for mass appeal, so in that way I sort of dealt with it as I would from a beta reader, taking what was useful from the feedback and leaving the rest.

When you got your YES! how did that feel? How did you find out – email, telephone, smoke signal?

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The YES was completely surreal. So surreal. I was in Dallas visiting my husband’s family over Christmas break when I got a voicemail from an editor. I didn’t quite catch the name of the press in the voicemail. At that point I was on baby number three and hadn’t submitted in more than a year, so I was wracking my brain to remember where the book was out, which press or contest. My husband had dropped off me and the kids at a McDonald’s and gone to the store, and I decided I couldn’t wait any longer to return the editor’s call. With the baby strapped to my chest and the older two encased in the play area, I phoned Robin Muira and realized the press was Blair. We chatted for a bit and she asked if the manuscript was still available, and said I was a finalist for the Lee Smith Novel Prize.

It was at that point that the older two starting shouting from the play area that I needed to watch them go down the slide, and could they have some chicken nuggets? We’re hungry! Mommy! You’re not watching me go down the slide! Robin asked if I had experience working with editors and would I be open to revisions and possibly rewriting a chapter, which I was completely fine with, and Mommy, watch me, Mommy, I’m hungry! I managed to take a page of notes about the contest prize details and Robin asked if I had any questions. I asked when the winner would be announced. She did a little sotto voce consult with her officemates and then said, “We’ll just tell you now. You won.” It was this intense euphoria realizing that a lifelong dream was going to come true, mingled with the everyday banality of childcare and chicken nuggets.  

Did you have to wait a period of time before sharing your big news, because of details being ironed out? Was that difficult?

I did! I was able to tell my inner-est inner circle right away as long as I swore them to secrecy, so that helped, but there were a couple weeks between finding out and being allowed to share with everyone. It felt similar to finding out about having a baby but waiting until the first trimester passed before sharing the news—like knowing you’re about to experience this huge, life-changing event, but sheltering the news in your hands for a bit before offering it up to the world.