A Conversation with Kate Reed Petty, author of True Story

The question at the heart of this book—what really happened on the way home from a high school party, and how four characters grapple with the fallout—touches issues that feel so timely and topical in the post-2016 election, post #MeToo era. But you actually began writing TRUE STORY in 2015. What compelled you to write this novel, and how do you see it resonating with our current moment? 

I’ve been angry for a long time about the ways credible allegations of sexual assault get silenced, twisted, and manipulated into blame for the victim. During my senior year of college, for example, there was a spate of rapes reported on campus in a few short months, and it sparked a toxic debate about the victims’ credibility. When charges in one of the rape cases were dropped, due to a lack of evidence, someone anonymously covered the campus in flyers that revealed the victim’s name and called her a liar: “I know what you did last semester. Care to revise your statement?” TRUE STORY was inspired in part by my frustration with people like that, who believe false accusations are a bigger problem than rape (and who use lame movie references to make their point).

Now, in the wake of the #MeToo movement, it’s especially exciting to publish this book because more people (especially men) are opening their minds to the reality of rape culture and the scope of the problem. But I’m also nervous that the ongoing backlash to #MeToo could set us back; because there’s a conception that it is now “easier” for victims to come forward, there are new risks of being disbelieved and shamed. I hope TRUE STORY is part of conversations that help dismantle preconceived notions about men and women and keep pushing the work of #MeToo forward.

You worked as a ghostwriter for 10 years, and ghostwriting plays a key role in your book. How did that influence your work as a novelist, and why did you choose this career for Alice?

I loved being a ghostwriter. I know some writers prefer to use a different part of their brain in their day job, but I’ve always seen my freelance work as cross-training for my fiction. Ghostwriting has made me a more flexible ventriloquist and expanded my range of voice and character. As a craft, it also made me interested in the ways that we all refine and polish our personal stories for public consumption—which is a big theme in TRUE STORY.

For Alice, who has always wanted to be a writer, ghostwriting is a way to make a living within the safety of telling other people’s stories. Her voice has been silenced in multiple ways throughout her life, and in some ways her choice of this career path is another kind of silence. But importantly, Alice’s success as a ghostwriter is also a testament to her talent, showing that she is able to convincingly tell stories from other people’s perspectives, which becomes important later on.  

Your book takes a deep dive into the mind of Nick, a high school lacrosse player. Nick and his teammates embody toxic masculinity and white male privilege, yet Nick is depicted with great nuance and sensitivity. How did you tap into the ethos of this group of young men? And how do you feel Nick differs from the bunch?

I was SO surprised when I found myself writing in Nick’s voice! Nick is the kind of guy that terrifies me—he’s the embodiment of “locker room talk.” But, to my dismay, it turned out that channeling the groupthink and masculine norms that guide Nick’s life came fairly naturally, probably because those norms have been so well-covered by the books and movies I grew up with.

I was also surprised by how much affection I developed for Nick. Originally, he had so much airtime in the book because I wanted to explore the role that bystanders play in toxic environments; the way that Nick starts to wrestle with his own responsibility reflects what I think our society is starting to do now, in the wake of #MeToo. In the end, I feel tenderly toward Nick because he’s trying, although he’s a difficult character to defend on paper. And I’m not sure he differs that much from the bunch—he would like to think that he is different, and he’s very good at justifying his actions to himself, but ultimately I wouldn’t call him a good guy. At least not yet! But he is learning!

TRUE STORY is a novel that defies genre. It is part literary fiction, part noir thriller, part horror, and spliced through with “found documents” like screenplays and drafts of a college admissions essay. Can you talk about the role that form plays in the novel?

You can interpret a lot of different meanings in how TRUE STORY plays with structure and genre. One simple answer is that the book mirrors the way rumors about sexual assault are often presented, pieced together, and evaluated in the public narrative. For example, I was stunned when Brett Kavanaugh produced his high school calendar as “evidence” of his own innocence; it felt eerily like something that would have happened in TRUE STORY.

Also, I just love genre fiction, and I wanted TRUE STORY to be that compulsively readable. Playing with the narrative and structure let me steal a bunch of the juicy tricks that make the best genre books so magnetic.  

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One of the main characters, Alice, uses horror movies to process her trauma, and TRUE STORY incorporates different horror elements into the story. What attracts you to the horror genre? How does horror operate as a coping mechanism?

I’m drawn to horror movies and also terrified of them. I’m a total fraidy cat. I’m usually a nervous wreck walking into a theater, but once the movie starts, it’s exhilarating. Watching a horror movie is such a physical, visceral experience. It’s obviously not for everyone, but for Alice, it’s a deeply satisfying catharsis to face a stylized, over-the-top version of fear while knowing that it’s just a movie.

I’m also interested in horror because it’s a genre that is sanctioned “for men” but that has so much space for women characters with rich emotional lives. There are so many horror movies from the ‘60s, ‘70s, and ‘80s pass the Bechdel test, for example. For all the overt misogyny that exists in horror, there are also many serious and subversive explorations of gender and sexual politics.

One book that influenced my thinking on this is “Men, Women and Chainsaws.” In it, Carol Clover coins the term “Final Girl,” which is the single female character who fights her way to survival at the end of a slasher film (à la Jamie Lee Curtis in the Halloween movies). Clover argues that horror films invite male audiences to identify with the Final Girl’s pain and suffering, because most of the shots are from the POV of the victim, looking at the monster; Clover says horror is a way for young men to experience a masochistic fantasy of suffering by identifying with the victim without threatening their masculinity. Those horror movies don’t have an explicit feminist mission—the Final Girl is usually just a cipher—but in writing TRUE STORY, and thinking about how to get through to men, I was attracted to the idea of horror as a Trojan horse that could sneak in empathy and understanding for women’s experiences.  

A portion of TRUE STORY is made up of short movie scripts written by two characters in middle school. Do you have a background in filmmaking or screenwriting?

My older brother, JT Petty, is a director and screenwriter; when we were kids, I used to act in the horror movies he made on our dad’s camcorder. Those home movies were some of the most fun I’ve ever had in my life, and they’re the inspiration behind the home movies in the book.

Screenwriting is such a fun and precise art form, and I really enjoy it. JT and I wrote a screenplay together that has attracted some interest—Simon Pegg and J.K. Simmons have signed on to star in the film—called My Only Sunshine. It’s a bank heist story, inspired by “Who’s Afraid of Virginia Woolf,” where a married couple robs a bank then gets into a vicious, marriage-ending fight while holding everyone hostage. It also has a dramatic, genre-bending plot twist, which makes it kin to TRUE STORY.

Truth is malleable in your book, constantly shifting and evolving depending on the perspective of each chapter. How do you define the nature of truth in the book and its relationship to power – and to the question of who gets to tell the story, and why?

This is a difficult question to answer, but one thing I’ve been thinking about lately is Rashomon, the classic film told through multiple people’s perspectives, which is about the essential unreliability of eyewitnesses. The point of that movie is well-made, but I think TRUE STORY is the opposite of Rashomon. While TRUE STORY challenges readers to question what is “real” and “true” throughout the book, it lands on an answer at the end, and ultimately reaffirms the possibility of finding the truth. This was important to me, because I wanted the book to defy the modern version of Rashomon, which is too often a “he said, she said” story.

“He said, she said” is a defeatist genre that lets justice off the hook, because we can never know what really happened. The structure of this kind of story creates the impression that we’re hearing different perspectives on equal footing. But there’s usually an inherent power imbalance. If it’s the word of a woman against that of a man, for example, her side of the story is dragged down by generations of myths and pop culture tropes about the motivations and inherent untrustworthiness of women. Calling it “he said, she said” disguises the unfairness of the storytelling exercise.

And this is especially important now, because that blueprint is being applied across the political landscape—the idea of listening to “both sides” has been weaponized to give voice to hate speech and extremist points of view. As a country, we have to do a better job of recognizing bias, because we’re not yet very good at truly and fairly listening to the testimonies of people who are speaking out from positions of less power against those with more power. 

TRUE STORY is your debut novel. What was your writing process like? How do you feel about having it out in the world?

I spent the whole time I was writing this book telling myself I was crazy. I didn’t think anyone would ever want to read such a crazy book. I kept writing at first because I was enjoying it so much; later on, when I got to the point where I worried I’d had too much fun and there were too many different voices and twists, I kept writing because I wanted to prove to myself that I could pull it off. My plan was always to finish the book, put it away, and then write a normal book that I could publish.

 I finished a first draft in 2017 and shared it with some friends, who—hooray!—liked it. At that point, I started a long process of editing; the basic construction of the book hasn’t changed, and the voices are largely the same, but it took a lot of thinking (and wonderful editorial guidance) to get all of the loose corners tucked in.

What do you hope readers will take away from TRUE STORY?

I hope the experience of reading TRUE STORY is first and foremost a delight. I hope it’s the kind of book you can’t put down. But I also hope the story is something readers thinking about, and that people want to talk about, for a long time afterwards.

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I saw on your Manuscript Wish List that you are seeking compelling, memorable stories that inspire a wealth of emotions, particularly from marginalized voices. I believe you may be interested in FORTUNES OF 42, a young adult fantasy novel imbued with the allure of fate, communitas, and ever-changing fortunes, complete at 92,000 words. This is a good, personalized intro. Usually I recommend jumping right in with your hook, but you've clearly done your homework and this is a strong start.

While sweating copiously under the blistering blaze of the sun and gazing up in childlike awe at the Demigod who commands the Terra, Ether, and Abyss,the first time I read this I thought Ether and Abyss were names of characters. You've got a lot of worldbuilding vocabulary jammed into this para, and that means the reader has to untangle it. With 200 other queries waiting in the inbox, they might not take the time. eighteen-year-old passive and withdrawn Prince Lucian of the Adarian Empire comes to a realization: He has doomed them all. You're also using two words where one will suffice, and a query needs to succint as possible. Choose between blistering / blaze and passive / withdrawn. Right now your first para is a bit of a muddle of a run-on. Don't be afraid to use periods to break this up a bit.

Lucian disregarded his father’s warning and ventured beyond the confines of his palace to attend a festival that was soon invaded by the enemy. Now, he and forty-one others are held captive in an ancient city with impenetrable mysteries, and guarded around-the-clock by elite Demigods who would ruthlessly enforce order with violence and constrain them to kneel to what? in penitence. Lucian must work with his motley crew of fellow captives to outmaneuver the Demigods and escape the city. If he fails, he will risk the wrath of the divine, lead his empire to calamity, and consign himself and his peers to their demise. But isn't that already happening, in a way? Hasn't he already risked their wrath, imperiled his empire, and pretty much led them to their deaths? Right now this doesn't show a plot - it shows a plot element. A guy made a bad decision and is now in a bad spot and wants to escape, but that's risky. That's not a plot, that's a thread. What's the bigger picture? What's at stake beyond a punishment that they are already enduring? What is the choice that has to be made? What do these two cultures have against each other in the first place?

FORTUNES OF 42 is a standalone with series potential, and is comparable to Sorcery of Thorns by Margaret Rogerson and The Unwilling by Kelly Braffet. It contains an aro-ace protagonist, LGBTQ+/POC characters, and hints of enemies-to-lovers romance.

I am a Vietnamese-American nonbinary first-generation summa cum laude film graduate of California State University, Long Beach. I am also a member of the Gutsy Great Novelist Writers Studio. My film critiques are published on CMRubinWorld, and my portfolio can be viewed at: juliankimcao.wixsite.com/home.

Great bio and good comp titles. Right now you need to get the bigger picture on the paper. What's at stake beyond these 42 people? How does Lucian change and grow through out the story? What must he risk, with so much ALREADY risked - and failed? You describe him as withdrawn and and passive, but never hint to that changing, which doesn't bode well if he's going to be leading a group out of imprisonment.

Habits For A Happier Life At Home

Developing positive habits at home can actually impact your mood with positive effects. Here, we’ll help you create household habits that will help you build a framework for a happier life.

Building and maintaining good habits can provide our lives with a positive framework, but these habits don’t simply happen by chance. It’s pretty easy to fall into bad habits that impede life around the house. A happy routine can support a happy mood, so if we stick to positive routines around our homes, we stand a good chance of keeping negative habits at bay.  

There is some psychological evidence behind the power of routine to support contentment, even happiness. Although adventure and spontaneous action can lend spice to our lives, they can make life seem a bit chaotic, and that can prove stressful. Many people become bothered and decidedly unhappy when their pleasant routines are disturbed. While we always want to leave some space for change and flexibility, we can certainly protect our positive frame of mind by promoting positive habits.  

What Are the Benefits of Creating Habits That Stick?

Creating good habits around the house allows you to reach your goals if you leverage your habits appropriately. Some habits may seem more mundane than others. For instance, can a cleaning routine really propel your work success? The mere act of disciplining ourselves to complete our routines helps us create a self-culture of positive behaviors. Being productive at home can mirror our workplace productivity. Plus, there’s a decided benefit of having a clean house that’s always company-ready; it can become our retreat, a sanctuary that we can unwind in.

How to Make Good Habits Stick and Bad Habits Vanish

First, it helps to take stock when trying to get into a healthy routine at home. Our healthy routine might involve a nutritious diet, healthy sleep patterns, and routine chores. But, what are the bad habits that threaten our well-being and our healthy habit-forming goals? Carefully assess some of your most frustrating bad habits, the habits you want to change. You might have a bad habit of falling asleep on the couch after work, which prevents you from exercising or eating an early dinner. You might have a habit of allowing the television to distract you from performing the chores outlined in your daily routine.  

To make the bad habits disappear, you first have to identify them and commit to change. You have to understand your pitfalls so that you can avoid falling into them. Maybe you love potato chips - one way to counteract this is to avoid the snack aisle at the grocery store, and opt for fruit and healthier sections instead. Avoid temptations and replace them with more healthful options. Only when we tackle our bad habits head-on with definitive strategies can we transform them into the positive habits that we know can improve our lives and mood.  

The Importance of Routines for Our Happiness and Stability

People spend considerable time at home, and increasing numbers of people are working from their homes too. If you’re working even some of the time from your house or simply want to improve the quality of your life when you are at home, you should strive to create routines that lead to enhanced stability and happiness. Good habits can set a foundation for our lives; they can form the bedrock of each day. Our habits can become the building blocks we use to create the good life we crave.

Here, we’ll provide some tips for developing a healthy routine designed to ensure greater stability around the house. Feel free to adapt this advice as needed. However, take care when creating your routines that each supports the well-being of your mind, body, and even your spirit.

At Home Morning Routine

Establishing a good morning routine is particularly important because it sets the mood for the day. If your mornings are without a routine, building a productive day on a shaky foundation can be challenging. To help you create a positive morning routine, consider the following tips:

Wake Up Early

Even if you relish sleeping in, there are some essential benefits of waking up early that you don’t want to overlook. First, you can get the early-morning brain fog over before you begin work. Brain fog and sleepiness can last anywhere from two to even four hours. Starting work while you’re still sleepy can undermine your productive day. By waking up early, you can ease into your day and set yourself up for more success once you arrive at work.

Meditate

Starting the day with a clean and clear mindset can help us reduce stress and even form an effective barrier against it. You can clear your mind of bad dreams or worries by actively meditating for a few moments or even longer. Some people choose to wake up and sit at the edge of their beds to meditate first thing in the morning. Others choose to set aside time before breakfast to sit on their back porch to watch the birds. Taking a moment to clear your mind can help you prepare yourself mentally for the day ahead. 

Eat Breakfast 

If you’ve slept for eight hours, your body wants to refuel in the morning. It needs to be hydrated and fed. Breakfast is a mealtime that’s fraught with bad habits. Too often, people skip breakfast, forcing their bodies to function for hours before lunchtime. Others may grab a doughnut or something similarly unhealthy, which is not doing their bodies any favors nutritionally speaking either. Set yourself up for breakfast success by purchasing healthy items that don’t require a lot of preparation. Yogurt, fruit, and whole-grain toast are a few items to have on hand so you can eat something healthy each morning.

Exercise

Exercise provides us with an energy boost. Stretching or even taking a walk can help us improve our circulation and ready us for the day. Waking up late and rolling into work still feeling tired and lethargic is no recipe for productivity. Exercise sharpens our minds while supporting physical fitness. Include a walk each morning, even if it’s a short one, so that you get your body into gear for the day.

Get Ready for the Day

Even if you work from home, it’s essential to create a routine that gets you ready to be productive. Put on your work clothes. Fill your water bottle with fresh water. Shower, brush your teeth and hair, just as if you were going to commute to a job across the city. These habits may be usual, but they support a positive routine.

Plan Your Day and Begin

When you’re ready to start your main workday, create a plan. Your goals may be small. You may want to start the day by checking emails. Whatever you do, ensure that you portion out your time appropriately to address all the goals outlined in your plan.

At Home Afternoon Routine

If you’re working from home, it’s easy to get off track because no one will notice except for you. However, if you want to maintain your productivity and get your work accomplished without having to cram it all in later, you’ll want to create a positive afternoon routine.

Designate Your Workspace

Having a designated workspace at home will allow you to feel as if you’re “going to work” after all. Ensure that you have all the tools you need to get your work done and good lighting, a comfortable and supportive chair, and good ventilation.

Healthy Snacks

Keep your healthy diet on track by reaching for healthy snacks during your workday. Fruit, almonds, and water will help you stay energized physically and mentally.

Take Stretch Breaks

Be sure to give your brain and body breaks. Take five-minute breaks to walk the dog, stretch, or even throw a load of laundry in the washer. A short break in the routine helps you reset and gives your mind and body a chance to recharge.  

Lunch

Try to avoid taking a working lunch and leave your desk to eat. Too much work can stress your brain. Allow yourself to unwind. Enjoy a healthy lunch in your kitchen or on your patio.

Quitting Time

Try to stick to a set time to end your workday so that you can maintain a healthy work-life balance. Clean off your desk so that it’s ready for the next day.

Night Routine

Your evening routine is important because it allows you to unwind and relax doing things you enjoy. Here are a few ways to fill your night with positive activities.

Nutritious Dinner

Get into the habit of making a nutritious dinner during your workweek. Ensure that you have a balanced meal each night to support your health. As your dinner cooks, use the time to plan the next night’s meal so that you’re always a step ahead.

Meditate or Journal

After a long day, it helps to alleviate the day’s stresses with another round of meditation. Some people prefer yoga or meditating outdoors in their garden. Journaling can also help you destress and set new goals like creating plans for the next day or week.

Me Time

It’s essential to fill your “me time” with things you enjoy doing, like mingling with family, watching television, reading, or crafting. No matter how busy you feel, it’s helpful to do what you love to do because it alleviates stress and supports your overall well-being.

Skin Care Routine

Taking care of your skin is part of maintaining your health. Moreover, it can feel great to deep clean and nourish your skin before getting ready for bed.

Relax

Finally, establish a sleep routine. Some people prefer to listen to music before bed. Others like to unwind with some essential oil. Try to avoid using any electronics before bed as they can stimulate the brain, making it hard to fall asleep. Try to avoid drinking water before bed, or you may have to get up in the middle of the night to use the bathroom, which can impede a good night’s sleep.

Use these tips to create a consistent daily pattern. If the idea of a rigid routine bothers you, remember that you can always take the weekend off or create a different pattern of behavior for the weekends. After all, you want to make the most of your weekends too! Try these activities for a month and see if you don’t begin to feel better physically and mentally. Remember, you can continuously refine these tips to enhance your personal schedule.