Eleanor Lerman on Writing a Love Letter to NYC + Its People

Inspiration is a funny thing. It can come to us like a lightning bolt, through the lyrics of a song, or in the fog of a dream. Ask any writer where their stories come from and you’ll get a myriad of answers, and in that vein I created the WHAT (What the Hell Are you Thinking?) interview. 

Today’s guest for the WHAT is Eleanor Lerman, author of The Game Café: Stories of New York City in Covid Time — nine stories of people who live in New York City—or are traveling there—in the midst of the coronavirus pandemic.

Ideas for our books can come from just about anywhere, and sometimes even we can’t pinpoint exactly how or why. Did you have a specific origin point for your book?

In the height of the covid pandemic, when the television news continually featured stories about “the death” of New York City because people were fleeing, the hospitals were overrun, the business districts were deserted and no one would ever return to offices, etc., etc., I became incensed at the idea that anyone could think New York City was ever going to become a ghost town. To begin with, as a lifelong New Yorker and the daughter of a factory worker, the argument seemed to me to stem from an elitist view of urban life—the people “fleeing” were actually those who had a choice to do so because they had the wealth to own a second home in the suburbs or to simply buy another home in an area where the pandemic was having less of a devastating impact. So, the stories in my collection, The Game Café: Stories of New York City in Covid Time were born from my outrage at the notion that a city built by immigrants, fueled by the work and ingenuity of a diverse population, offering community to people across the gender spectrum, and that provides opportunity to anyone willing to take on the challenges of urban life could be brought down by the coronavirus. Each story in the collection focuses on the lives of different individuals coping with the pandemic in their own way and each, in their own way, is going to find a way not only to live through this dark time but come out on the other side with a new understanding of how deeply integral their relationship to the life of the city is to their own individual life story.

Once the original concept existed, how did you build a plot around it?

There are nine short stories in the collection and each is built around the same concept: how the coronavirus pandemic has affected the life of a particular individual. Some of the characters have lost their jobs, one is living in Los Angeles and decides to drive home to New York, others reassess their relationship to a sibling or an adult child, and some are suffering from long-term illnesses (not Covid-related), but the decisions they make and the experiences they have all stem from how the pandemic is impacting their lives.

Have you ever had the plot firmly in place, only to find it changing as the story moved from your mind to paper?

This is almost always the case, whether I am writing a short story or a novel. Once a character begins to take on substance and develop a voice, he or she usually helps to move the story along in a direction I had not necessarily anticipated. That’s fine because I begin any story with knowing how it will end and as long as I’m moving towards that ending, letting the characters change the plot as we move along is actually helpful. What I have learned about my work is that I trust myself as a writer so no matter how the story changes, I can adapt.

Do story ideas come to you often, or is fresh material hard to come by?

I have been telling myself all kinds of stories in my mind since I was a child so there is always something brewing, 

How do you choose which story to write next, if you’ve got more than one percolating? 

It would be unusual for me to find myself in that situation. I am very disciplined about my work, meaning that I don’t wait for inspiration (whatever that means) but rather, sit down at my computer every day intent on working. The stream-of-consciousness thing that goes on in my mind all the time just pushes one idea forward from that long, rolling river of ideas and that becomes the one I focus on.

I have 6 cats and a Dalmatian (seriously, check my Instagram feed) and I usually have at least one or two snuggling with me when I write. Do you have a writing buddy, or do you find it distracting

My office is an old purple couch and I sit on one end with a laptop. For over twenty years, there has been one or another small dog snoozing away on the other end. The day after my previous, much-loved dog passed away, I sat down on the couch, opened the laptop, looked over at the empty spot on the other side of the cushions and knew I couldn’t go on unless I had a new assistant. Two days later, I did. She’s a little white dog and her name is SuzyQ. And now, my work proceeds just fine.

Eleanor Lerman is the author of numerous award-winning collections of poetry, short stories and novels. She is a National Book Award finalist, the recipient of the Lenore Marshall Poetry Prize from the Academy of American Poets, and was awarded a Guggenheim Fellowship as well as fellowships from the National Endowment for the Arts for poetry and the New York Foundation for the Arts for fiction. She has also received the John W. Campbell Award for the Best Book of Science Fiction. Her most recent novel, Watkins Glen (Mayapple Press, 2021), received an Independent Press award, among others. Find her online at eleanorlerman.com and on Facebook (facebook.com/eleanor.lerman).

Philip Fairbanks on The Challenge of Plotting a True Crime Thriller

Inspiration is a funny thing. It can come to us like a lightning bolt, through the lyrics of a song, or in the fog of a dream. Ask any writer where their stories come from and you’ll get a myriad of answers, and in that vein I created the WHAT (What the Hell Are you Thinking?) interview. 

Today’s guest for the WHAT is Philip Fairbanks, author of Smash, Smash, Smash: The True Story of Kai the Hitchhiker

Ideas for our books can come from just about anywhere, and sometimes even we can’t pinpoint exactly how or why. Did you have a specific origin point for your book?

That is generally not the case, but is definitely so here. In 2017 I was doing news features and op-eds for Inquisitr. My friend Rachel Cochran sent me a message saying I should look into this Kai the Hitchhiker case. I remembered the viral incident, but not sure if I’d heard about what happened in New Jersey. I reached out to Kai while he was still in the jail at Elizabeth where he was held for over 4 years in isolation and 6 years before his trial would begin.

I recorded a few interviews over the phone, but we’ve kept in touch via Jpay messages over the years. When I heard from RAW TV Ltd. in London that they wanted to license some interview material for me I started to compile my previous articles and plan an attack strategy for a book. 

Once the original concept existed, how did you build a plot around it?

The book is non-fiction, but I was incredibly heartened to hear that it read like a thriller in a review from Fiona Dodwell. Obviously, having compelling, true material to cull from was a benefit, but still one of the most challenging things initially was figuring out how to tell Kai’s story, but also give it universality: show that it’s not just Kai at stake here. How municipal, police and prosecutorial misconduct is a systemic issue within Union County, New Jersey but also across the country.

I start out with the “two fateful rides” that catapulted Kai to beloved fame and spun his life into a nightmare that persists to this day after being allegedly drugged and raped by a wealthy and well-connected lawyer who picked him up in Times Square. From those two viral rides, we skip back to give some brief histories of surfing, hitchhiking and New Jersey’s culture of corruption. Cults, cop gangs, conflicts of interests, cover-up, mafia ties, and a conspiracy to deprive Kai of his due process that has been “sufficiently alleged” as per a federal judge last July. 

From there we go into issues specific to New Jersey and Union County, talk about a disturbing precedent in the New Jersey court system that shields predators from being disbarred and go into the “code of silence” that allows for such police corruption and carceral abuse to continue. 

Have you ever had the plot firmly in place, only to find it changing as the story moved from your mind to paper?

Just like a fiction thriller, the story itself and my journey into it was full of surprising twists and turns. I had an outline by early 2022, but by Summer I ended up having to add additional chapters. The racist cop gang in Union County, “The Family,” led to the discovery that the cult Kai’s mother was affiliated was the well-known child abuse cult “The Family” (formerly the Children of God). Looking into the waterfront connection led me to the story of Union County prosecutor’s covering for family friends who happened to be associated with the Genovese crime family. An off the record source gave me a tip that I wasn’t able to fully verify or corroborate as of yet, but it did lead me on to a rabbit hole related to the importance of the Port of Elizabeth in Union County to cocaine trafficking from South America through the east coast and on throughout the rest of the US. 

Do story ideas come to you often, or is fresh material hard to come by?

I get story ideas from surprising sources. I try to read as much as possible, have diverse research interests and often receive story tips from random people in DMs and emails.

How do you choose which story to write next, if you’ve got more than one percolating?

That’s always a difficult choice, I usually leave it up to factors outside mere personal interest (though that obviously plays a part). For instance,  I have a project I had been researching and outlining since 2020 that I had to put on the back burner because there’s an archive in Buffalo I’ll have to visit before I can finish it. Several work projects have tangential connections as well though, so often researching a specific topic or making notes on a book or document could do double (or even triple) duty. 

I have 6 cats and a Dalmatian (seriously, check my Instagram feed) and I usually have at least one or two snuggling with me when I write. Do you have a writing buddy, or do you find it distracting?

I currently don’t have any pets, but I used to have a little rat named Erasmus. I think rodents get an unnecessarily bad name personally. Obviously not wild rats, but any pet rats or hamsters I’ve ever owned or known were sweet and intelligent animals. I’m living a bit out of the way at the moment, so it’s nice to watch the squirrels (another of my favorite rodents!) hop around. 

Philip Fairbanks is a writer with over 20 years publishing experience covering news and entertainment. His work has appeared in the peer-reviewed journal of art Afterimage, CUNY's graduate newspaper The Advocate, UK's Morning Star newspaper, Australia's New Dawn magazine, Ghettoblaster magazine, New Noise magazine and several other print and online publications. His second non-fiction book, Smash, Smash, Smash: The True Story of Kai the Hitchhiker should be available for sale at major retailers in February. 

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Ten years ago Lucie Elsayed died and returned to life, saved by a bargain between her father and a Persian deity. Really great hook! One minor detail would be to include a slight indication her age, perhaps rephrasing this slightly so that it refers to the father taking the action in order to "save his child" Marked only by her silver hair, Lucie is ignorant of the origins of her rebirth and instead occupied with practicing ballet and attending parties. This is the first indication that the setting is actually the contemporary world. Maybe mention Paris setting sooner. But when a god of wind splits the sky and abducts her father as payment for the deal he made a decade ago, Lucie is plunged into a world of supernatural intrigue lurking beneath the streets of Paris.

Enter Wyatt, a boy with incandescent tattoos and a mandate to safeguard mortals from demons, who recognizes Lucie for what she truly is: an Immortal, a descendent of the same venerable Persian deities who have taken her father. Imbued with superhuman speed and endurance, Lucie must rely on Wyatt’s guidance to master her gifts, though he may be more insufferable than he is charming. Were the powers unknown to her before? Is she shocked? Scared? Feeling blessed? As Lucie delves deeper into the secrets of her family’s past, she suspects that defeat is not an option. If she cannot reclaim her father and unveil her buried heritage, she will lose everything she cares for as Paris is consumed by the forces her family has been bound to for generations. I think we need just a nudge here as to how they are bound. Is she like Wyatt, fighting the demons? Or is her family history tied in a different way?

EMPIRE OF IMMORTALS is the first book in a young adult urban fantasy series set in contemporary Paris and interwoven with Persian mythology. Complete at 89,000 words, it blends the evocative magic of Hafsah Faizal’s We Hunt the Flame with the wit of Tracy Deonn’s Legendborn.

As a Middle Eastern American author with a background in marketing and international relations, I am passionate about sharing the fables of my Persian ancestors. Given your interest in personalization for agent, I believe my manuscript would be a great fit for your list.

Really, really fantastic query here, including the last two paras with the personalization. I think it needs some very minor tweaks, and I would also find a way to make this a standalone with series potential, if at all possible.