Indie Marketing Guru David Gaughran Shares Tips For Indie Publishing Success

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This summer I'm adding a co-host, fellow author Kate Karyus Quinn. We'll be doing a series that focuses on hybrid and indie authors. If you're thinking of going the Self Pub route we've got authors who found success with six figure sales, as well as authors who are just starting out on the road to indie publishing. Learn from them. Learn with us.

Today's guest is David Gaughran, author of the historical adventures Liberty BoyMercenary & A Storm Hits Valparaiso, and has helped thousands of authors to self-publish their work via his workshops, blog, and books such as Let’s Get DigitalStrangers to Superfans, BookBub Ads Expert, and Following.

In May 2020, he was one of the recipients of the Kate Wilhelm Solstice Award. The SFWA President said, “David Gaughran has been doing yeoman’s work for years, alerting indie writers about predatory schemes and warning them about changes in independent publishing. His work makes the science-fiction and fantasy landscape safer for writers.”

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Mindy:             So I know that you have a lot of information that you put out into the world for other indie authors, and Kate is always forwarding your newsletter to me and saying, Check this out. David said this, David said that. And I'm like. Okay, Cool. So could you just talk a little bit about how you ended up in the indie publishing world at all? 

David:              So I started writing seriously, like writing with the aim of actually getting something published somewhere about maybe 10 11 12 years ago, something like that. Because back then, self publishing wasn’t really a viable option. At least not in 2008, 2009. I think there was a handful of pioneering romance authors that were starting to do well at it. But that news hadn’t really reached me. I was still under the impression that self publishing was like the last refuge of the scoundrel, you know, or something that would irreparably damage your career. 

I was querying agents, and I think I queried nearly every agent out there him with a book that probably wasn't fully cooked either. So rather inevitably, I got a whole bunch of rejections. But towards the end of the process, you know, I started getting, you know, non form rejections where they actually put your name in the email and the title of your book. And these little tea leaves that you're reading, you know, looking for progress anywhere.

And then an agent actually told me he wants to represent me. And I remember, I remember getting the email. I think it was It was just before Christmas and this agent says that he read my book and everything. The office had read the book and they loved it. And they wanted me to be there next author, you know? So obviously I was excited. The last line of the email, he said something like, We're just about to close for the Christmas holidays. So please give my office a call when we get back when we reopen in January. And he gave some date, which is, like, three weeks away or something.

So I was just on tenterhooks the whole time. Actually, I wasn't on tenterhooks. The whole time I assumed that I made it as a writer. So I during the Christmas holidays, telling everyone I was going to be the next big thing and, and spending all the advance money in my head. And then in January, when I made contact with the agent again, and he’d just changed his mind. He wasn't interested anymore. And I don't know, Um, maybe he read it a second time and saw there was issues there that maybe were trickier to address or maybe took on something else in the same niche. You know, or maybe he got a book from an existing client in the same niche and didn't want to go out to the same editors with a similar book. I know there could be lots of lots of reasons for this kind of thing. 

Kate:                He didn't give an excuse or like... 

David:              No, he basically ghosted me. Didn't return my call. He just sent me... I think his assistant sent me a one line email. Thanks, no longer interested. It was all very weird, you know? And this was before I had any kind of public life, or was engaging in various spats on Twitter or anything like that. So it couldn't have been something like that. And so I never, I never really knew the reason why, but as I found out, as I got more experience in the industry, that stories like that aren't that uncommon. 

Now I think the power shift has a little bit more towards writers. At the time, I was pretty despondent, tried to shake off the disappointment and hide from everybody that I told I was going to be a literary sensation. I just got cracking on another book, you know, and something a little bit more commercial, something with an American protagonist and something set in a place that might be a little more familiar to the American audience I was aiming for and I got a few chapters in and then I kind of hit a wall and I just couldn't push through.

I was thinking, you know, it was the first, you know when you use that first sticky point in a book. Everything, everything questioning my ability as a writer whether there was any point to doing any of this and I was thinking about giving it all up, and I was just casting around, you know, what should I do here? And then I think I stumbled across some forum where a lot of self publishers were hanging out, and I just started reading some of the posts and seeing these people having a lot of success just from publishing their own books. And like in the last couple of months before that, I'd started hearing about you know, these first people that I had started getting success from self publishing people like Joe Konrath and Amanda Hocking and these these first kind of self publishing superstars about 10 years ago.

But most of them were people who had come from traditional publishing, and they had maybe a backlist ready to upload. And obviously they had a bit of experience and some storytelling chops and maybe some contacts and, and all that kind of thing. Which, which, you know, most people starting out won’t have any of that. But these people in this forum were all people who have just started a few months ago, and they were all posting their sales figures every month. You know, they start off first month, making $10 next month. They might make $35 the next ones after that, 150 and six months later, they're starting to pull in $1000 a month. I was just like, this is amazing like this... it seemed possible for the first time I could see an actual path to making money out of it.

I was still in thrall with the idea of getting an agent and a publisher like Self Publishing at that time was very much a Plan B for me. And now it’s a Plan A, and I wouldn't I wouldn't take a publishing deal unless there was some kind of obscene money on the table. But back then it was definitely a Plan B. And so I start off just self publishing a few short stories just to see and just to learn the ropes, to see if I enjoy the process of being a publisher and of being a marketer of my own work. But also, I could keep one foot in the world of traditional publishing because I still think, I think I still had a couple of agents who were reading the full, you know, so I just I didn't want to close that door by self publishing the book until I heard from them. Never, of course, did actually hear from them.

But when I when I started self publishing, the first thing I noticed right away was I just got out of that funk that I was in, like being a querying author is... It's such a negative place to be, you know, especially when you're just getting rejection all the time. And it's so very hard to keep summoning up the energy and the positivity that you need to write, when all you're hearing is no or your writing’s not commercial no, or it's not good at all, or you just, You're not even getting a foot in the door. No feedback to work with. You know, that's just the nature of the business, but it's tough being in that position when you're starting out.

But once I start something, it the dynamic changed completely like the internal psychological dynamic changed completely. You know, you're getting people, strangers are buying your book. They're giving you money. They're reviewing your book, they’re emailing you. I just like we just go with the pure joy of writing again. I remember writing another short story at my kitchen table. I think within two weeks I had that short story, had a cover for it. I had edited, formatted, uploaded and then it was on sale.

And so it just seemed like so radically different from the traditional publishing process that, you know, I was just amazed like I just how different and how positive experience it was for me personally. So I think by the end of that first month, when I got my first sales report from Amazon, I was like, Okay, I'm self publishing everything from now on, like I don't care what agent is reading way book now I'm just I'm going to self publish it, and I haven't had any interest in returning to the path that—the thing that I was dreaming about so much, you know, I have no interest in going that direction.

And it's pretty funny, I think one of the agents that actually rejected me for my historical novel, she read one of the short stories that I self published, and she asked me if I want to turn it into a YA novel. So I got the opportunity than to send her rejection letter, which was extremely Oh, if you ever get a chance as an author to do that, I strongly recommend going for it. It felt really good.

Kate:                I often hear people talk about the early days of self publishing as almost like how people talk about like the gold rush, like the first people to discover gold like they were just like scooping it off the ground. And now it's, you know, so many people have heard there's gold in them hills, and they've all rushed. You really gotta you know, you gotta dig for it and some people go mining and they don't come up with anything. Is that totally different 10 years ago to today. 

David:              It's a constant discussion that we have as self publishers, you know whether things have gotten a harder if it's harder to start today. It's changed in positive ways and in negative ways. I think the challenge is different. I don't think it's necessarily harder. I think you know, the standards are higher these days in terms of reader expectation, and presentation and branding. And obviously the marketing side in the last five years particularly, has gotten a lot more complicated as self publishers and and publishers get savvy about things like mailing lists and Facebook ads and Web sites and everything else or the other.

And the market has just swelled so much. The markets is so much bigger than it was in 2011. So even like a you know, a moderate success in 2020 can can deliver huge amounts of sales. And also the tools we have for reaching readers are just so much better. Like I was talking about, you know, these authors that I was reading that in forums who were hitting that kind of success level on, back then in 2011 and someone started selling 1000 books a month in total across, you know, whatever they had published, we consider that they were on the way. That was just, you know, the kind of watermark everyone had, or if they were making $1000 a month or if they're selling 1000 books a month. People would basically consider someone was on the way. That they’d crossed through to the other side. They were now officially successful. You can take out a Book Bub, for example, or Bookwell feature deal, and you can sell two to 3000 books in a day. 

Kate:                I've only been, um, self publishing for a year. 1000 a month is definitely on the lower end. You know most places they have those levels of success and 1000 seems like a very one of the lower benchmarks that people are aiming for? 

David:              Yeah, and just to give an idea to anyone who is not aware, like of how lucrative that can potentially be. You know, we're often selling our books for 2.99, 3.99, 4.99, now is is a very common price point for Self publishers, and we're making basically $3.5 per sale. So if you're selling a thousand books, that's starting to become like a real income.

Kate:                Mindy and I were just at the same time as you are entering publishing is approximately the same time that Mindy and I were, but on the traditional side. I started writing seriously in 2007 and I queried two books that were not successful. And then my third book, I found an agent in 2011 and I was published in 2013. I'm still hybrid. I'm trying to keep a foot in both worlds. It's interesting, because when you're talking about how self publishing was seen then, I totally know, because with those two first failed books, I was like, should I self publish these? I was looking, you know, there are a lot of smaller online publishers. It was definitely the feeling that that, like you want to be traditional. That is definitely a choice, and I definitely feel like that has changed. I know tons of authors who were traditionally published and now are indie authors, and that is their income. That's a more reliable income, frankly. 

David:              You have more control over which, you know, especially in times like we're probably facing right now of economic turmoil. I think it's great for me personally. I like the idea of being able to control my career if sales dip or something happens that I have more direct influence over that, rather than leaving it in the hands of somebody else.

Mindy:             And also too,  just in traditional publishing. I've been fortunate. I've worked with the same editor for six books now, but turnover is crazy. So it's like you generally start to develop a working relationship, a good working relationship with an editor, and things were going awesome, and then they move houses, and that's just the way it is. They just, that's how it works. There's so much turnover and so much traveling in between publishing houses. I think I've had five or six different publicists in 7 to 8 years.

And as income? Yes. I mean, obviously, that's always a potshot. You have no control over things, and you can see opportunities like, for example, I have a book that is post apocalyptic and it deals with a world with very little water to drink. But the setting is very much like isolation and things like that. And sales really did take off on that book again here in the quarantine.

Luckily enough, they had already settled it to be for a dollar 99 during a certain time period, and it happened to coincide with the quarantine. So that was great and it helped. But it's like I couldn't put dollars toward marketing that, like I could use my social media. I could do things like that. I could, you know, try to get a Book Bub. But I don't have the infrastructure that a really successful indie has. You're just so much more nimble on your feet. You can react immediately to trends and what's going on in the market. I love being traditionally published. I get a lot of perks from that, but I see those pros for self publishing and indie publishing.

David:              Being able to react to events very quickly is, is such a boon. I remember one publisher in a conference talking about, you know, things that can happen in a writer's career that aren't their fault. But they often end up carrying the can for them. Like I think she was talking about some big debut that she was launching. I think it came at the same weekend as one of the recent royal weddings, So all that PR they'd lined up all that stuff that's really important for a traditionally published book. All that stuff got axed so they could do a 12 page special on Will & Kate. Or whichever one of them it was that weekend, and that's out of your control. But when you know when the publisher, maybe then is looking to offer you a contract, a new contract when you're looking for, and your agent is trying to get you a new deal. A few years later, there's no Asterix be beside those disappointing sales number saying Not the authors’ fault. Honestly, I would have been a bad psychological fit for traditional publishing because I would not have been able to handle a situation like that. I would have been burning down the house, burning bridges, probably an all directions. So I think it worked out better for both sides that I ended up self publishing rather than traditional publishing. 

Mindy:             It's interesting too, you mentioned, um, you know the things you can't control. I'm lucky I have a long enough tail that the epidemic is not going to ruin me. But debut authors that had a book come out, you know, in March or in April and probably here rolling into May. They're screwed like their royalty statements are gonna be printed in red ink. And so they started trying to delay releases if it was a big book, if it was something that people, they'd sunk a lot of money into. But that's not gonna happen across the board for everyone. A lot of people's careers are just gonna nose dive right out of the gate because of something that has nothing to do with their ability or talent. It's just bad luck. 

David:              Yeah. Unfortunately, the writer usually ends up footing the bill for whatever random event has happened, and that's just the structural nature of the business. And, you know, when I look at the way the economy might be going globally. I've always heard it said that books are a little bit recession proof in that, you know, people might. I know these aren't normal circumstances we have now. But normally in the recession, and people might tighten their belts by not going out for a meal. We're not going to the theater or to a movie and then just read a book instead. But I think that phrase was probably coined in the period before the $35 hardback and competing with the $9 Netflix subscription.

And I think, you know, sometimes we view the world of books as kind of separate and distinct, whereas really, our customers, our readers are people who could conceivably spend their leisure time and their disposable income on anything. I think you know, if you are traditionally published your leading out with an expensive hard back in the climate that's to come, It's gonna be pretty tough for you and the advantages of being self published, of course, I get to control all such things like price.

So I was just looking ahead at a couple of releases that I have coming up myself. I was trying to decide on a pricing strategy and a marketing strategy for the launch. And I ended up choosing a strategy which would be more aggressive than I would usually do at a launch. A cheaper pricing structure. Purely because I'm looking ahead and seeing that people probably will have a little bit less disposable income. So I want to plan around that, and I have the ability to do that. You know what? I'm probably three or four weeks away from launch that I can change the plan completely, whereas A publisher simply wouldn't be able to do that.

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Kate:                So, speaking of your newsletter, you have a fantastic newsletter. I think I first came to subscribe to your newsletter because I was on Facebook in an Indie author group, and I think it was when the whole MailChimp went out, thing went down and someone posted a link to your newsletter and too, I think you're blog and it was so great. It was so informative and helpful. And so that's I think, when I was like, Oh, I have to sign up and get this newsletter I'm missing out! Preach the gospel of the newsletter and speak about why it's so important and what it's done for you. I know in Indy World a newsletter is like the first thing every person says is like the importance of it. And I feel like in the traditional world, it's kind of seen as like just another tool in the toolbox. I think it's lumped in with, like Twitter and Facebook like—If you like it, do it! I think that's undercutting its importance. 

David:              I absolutely agree. I think it's a huge mistake not to prioritize your newsletter. Like if you compare a traditionally published author to the typical self published author, we're talking about the lack of control. You have less of those levers that you can pull to generate book sales for yourself. There's just simply less you can do because you don't control pricing. It doesn't make a lot of sense to spend money on Facebook ads and that kind of thing, which means you really need to focus more on the things that you do control. 

And, you know, mailing list is something that anybody can set up. And every author really should have one and not just have one, but really be and trying to maximize the benefits from from that strategy. And, you know, we were talking about uncertain times, and we don't know how the industry is going to look in a year. Will Barnes and Noble still exist? How many bookstores will there be? A lot? These questions are circulating, and no one knows the answer. But the best insurance policy. What they're concerned about Barnes and Noble going out of business, where you're concerned about Amazon, you’re concerned about your own publisher merging, losing your editor, whatever it is, doesn't matter. The best insurance policy you have against anything like that happening in the future is to have your own mailing list and have as many readers as possible. As many of your own readers as possible not just random people, but actually people in your target market of who actually read your niche. Not your friends and family, actual core fans of your genre. As many of those people that you can get as possible on your mailing list, the better off you’ll be and the more insurance You will have against any turmoil in the industry. 

I think a lot of people know that and they might have a list. But they might not know what to do with it. Or they Might not realize the benefits that you can get from being a bit more proactive with your strategy, and I guess because, like when I started in self publishing, there's so many things you have to wrap your head around: websites, marketing, publishing covers all that stuff, and I didn't pay a huge amount attention to my mailing list. I made a number of key mistakes, and hopefully other people could learn from my experience. I basically did most things wrong. 

I did the good part of actually having a list and having kind of having a bit of text in the back of every book, saying, You know, if you want to, want to read more, if you want to get an email when the next book is out, sign up here, and that was actually my first mistake. I decided that I didn't want to bother people. That people had, were getting too many emails anyway, and that I’ll only email them when I have a new release. And I think this is the kind of default position for most writers. They don't know what to say anyway and don't want to bother people. And they're trying to be considerate. And they decide to only email people when they have a new release. And this is a huge mistake, and especially if you're a slower writer and I'm a slow writer. I'm not one of these self publishing speed demons. So if you're a slower writer and you know you'll only email people, when you have a new book, the chances are that they will have forgotten who you are. Or you know how much they enjoyed your book when they get your email and what you’ll gradually see over a period of time. As I saw myself over a period of you know, eight years or whatever, however long I was doing this the wrong way and you see gradually falling engagement on those emails you know, less people replying, saying, Oh, well done. I'm excited to read the book. 

Less people opening the mail, less people clicking, less people buying the book. This has a cumulative effect on your own psyche. Of course. Where you starting to think that you know, people are just not enjoying your books, which they used to. Maybe you have lost that kind of X factor in your prose. And I remember I released a book in uh was the last historical novel I released, which is a few years ago, maybe 2016. And it was the best thing at the time was the best thing that I'd written by far. I thought, I felt like my storytelling and taking a big step forward with this book. And I sent out the mail, And I'm telling my partner within half an hour I said, This launch is a bust and she said, Oh, no, it's far too early, don't you? She thought I was just having launch jitters or something. But I knew straight away, just by seeing open rate on the email that this launch was gonna be a bad one and I knew it in half an hour because I could see that people just weren't opening the email. Either it Wasn't getting through in boxes because I didn't have very high engagement. I didn't have a lot of contact with these people in the last two years or whatever, or it was going to spam where they were seeing it and just ignoring it. 

Kate:                They were like, Who the hell is this? What is this junk?

David:              Yeah, because they didn't remember. Probably, I'm sure we like to think everyone on our list is eagerly awaiting our next book. But they might have signed up and, you know, they might have enjoyed your book signed up hoping to here when the next one is, and then just forgotten about you like I can't remember, especially heavy reader readers, you know, a book every three or four days or something like there's no, no possible way they'll remember all the authors they've enjoyed or all the list they signed up to, or whatever. So you've got you've got to maintain some kind of connection there. 

And I remember I read this book called Newsletter Ninja by Tammy Labrecque, which is the best book out there on email. If anyone wants to  get better at e mailers, I strongly recommend reading. Anyway, I read this book and actually was a course I did by her that she then turned into a book and I realized I was doing everything wrong. And I decided, you know, for once, I'm not going to just argue with somebody and question everything I'm being told to do. I'm just gonna zip it and do everything she's telling me to do because she sounds like she knows a lot more about this than I do. I don't get too many of those moments in life, but thankfully I had one at this particular moment.

So I said, Okay, I'm gonna start doing a regular email. I said, I'll do it first for my nonfiction audience and then I'll roll it out to fiction. And so I did that. I started with my nonfiction audience and I started doing a weekly newsletter which before anyone has a panic attack, I don't recommend doing that level of frequency for fiction. You don't need to. Monthly is fine, and but for this particular audience, it suited me and suited them to do a weekly email. It was It's a weekly email on, mostly on marketing. And once I started doing that like it was amazing. The difference, Um first thing I thought was I’m going to lose a lot of my list because I'd essentially broken the promise I'd made during sign up saying, I only bother you with a new release. Everyone's delighted to hear more regularly, most people were. You lose a few, but you know the amount that you gain is just so much greater. 

I started getting a lot more just direct personal emails in response too. I started having two way conversations, which is, which is good for the algorithms that are looking at, You know, whether you're a spammer or not. But it's also good for you psychologically, because you actually feel like you know, there's a point to writing these emails. I noticed the tone in my emails totally changed, whereas before I was almost apologetic. You know, this is a launch email. It should be. It should be. It should be hype. You know, you should be you excited going, you know, because people respond to passion! It should be you saying, Hey, I've got a new book. It's great! You're gonna love it! The characters are amazing. And it said, It's kind of like, Well, you know, if you're not too busy, you could click, maybe... maybe buy this book. And of course, you know that has an effect on on whether that email converts. If you're not excited about the book, the readers are like Why? Why should a reader be excited? 

So yeah, once I started doing this and just being a bit more professional and proactive about the whole email thing, it just took off like, like the sign ups went crazy. And then just you know, the responses to it as well. The opens, the clicks, the purchases. I'm, for me just as a writer, personally, it had a transformative effect akin to when I first started self publishing. I think I've gotten into a bit of a rut in my career for a variety of reasons and this really kind of signaled a kind of a rebirth. And it's only, I've only started rolling because I was focusing on the nonfiction side of my business for about 18 months, and then I started switching back to fiction. So I was rebooting everything. And I started rolling this process out in, I think it was January for my historical fiction, just doing it monthly. 

There's a few bumps in the road as I kind of adjusted to talking to people in a very different way. We're talking about stories from history and things like that. But once I, once I started getting it nailed down, the same thing started happening. Sign up started increasing and the response, when I do talk about my own books, which isn't, I should note that it's not something that I do in every email. Usually I'm talking about other people's books, their, or their stories from history that aren't directly related, to the world's that I'm running in, and then every so often I will mention, Oh, I've got a book or I've got a freebie right now. Got a sale or can you review this book? And then the response is amazing.

Kate:                I think that's so important what you're talking about. You have the list and you're emailing more frequently, but also your content is really, really good. You have information that is very current, and you put personality into your emails. That's something that I actually had a big thing with Mindy about ah, a year ago. And I was like, Mindy, your e mails are just like there's my new book that just came out. There's some other books you might like. See ya. And I was like, Mindy, you have to like... I was like, You're funny, like we've done tons of panels together and Mindy always kills and people love her and they think she's so funny. And then they look for her books and they're like... These books are not funny, but yeah, 

Mindy:             There's always a little bit of a let down when they realize that I'm actually just, like, kind of a monster. 

Kate:                But you give good panel. And I was like, Why don’t you put some of that personality into your email And she was like, I don't want to do that. People don't want that. And I was like, Yes, people want to feel like I'm opening this email and you, you know, it starts to feel like an email from a friend. Oh, what are they up to? And you always put David at the end of yours, like what you're listening to and I always think that's so fun.

Mindy:             Kate actually told me to read Tammy Lebrecque’s book the Newsletter Ninja, which I completely endorse as well. And I did the same thing. I was underlining passages. I was highlighting stuff. Step by step. Did everything that she said to do. And my newsletter like it exploded. I think my open rate had been like five percent, and my click had been like at one. And now my open rate is like 40 and my click is usually around 11%. 

David:              That's great. That's great improvement. Yeah. Do you feel better now about writing an email?

Mindy:             Yeah. Before it was such a chore and I was doing exactly what you said - I would send an email when I had a new book, and it was basically just me asking for their money. You know, once a year, the dis enrollment rate was so high cause like you said, they didn't remember me. They didn't know who I was or they would think that I was spamming them. I would get emails that woud be like I didn't sign up for this because they didn't remember because they signed up 11 months ago so, I mean, that's another reason to keep going out there once a month. I want to circle back then and talk about the fact that your newsletter is such a Touchstone for lots and lots of people in the indie world. How did you make this transition to becoming an authority?

David:              The first thing you have to understand about me is that I'm 99% powered by spite? It's a renewable resource as well. So I never had planned to get into writing nonfiction and writing about publishing and marketing and all that. What I started blogging about all the steps I was doing in self publishing as I was doing them, it was all down to a forum argument I had somewhere way back in 2011. I'm sure you guys remember there was all these wars between traditional publishers and self publishers. What was the best path, and everyone was cheering for their team. I think it was someone was telling me that I was, I was going to fail and the only people that can self publish are people who come from traditional publishing with all that experience and knowledge and backlists and everything else. And I said, Well, I'm gonna give it a go because all these sort of people are doing it. And so you know, why can't I give it a shot?

So I said, you know, I’ll blog every step of the way so you can see if I fail or not. And I was actually posting my sales reports. I stopped doing it after about a year, I think. But I was posting all my sales reports every month. Even the 1st one was, like $15 or something and just saying what I did every month to get those sales and also then blogging and that, you know, had to find a cover designer because back then, that's the other difference from today. Back then, there was, there was no, I don't think there was a single guide to support to get there. Not enough for the digitally focused self publisher. It was, for the older kind of people would be going towards vanity presses or offset printing and all that.

So, yeah, we have to kind of create all these resources ourselves and figure everything out ourselves at the start, like What's the best way to, you know, format an E book and all that kind of thing. So I was sharing all this stuff as we were all figuring it out. And it was just towards the end of that process, one of the people who started reading my blog asked me if I could put all the post together in a pdf so he could print it out and then follow it along as he was doing it himself. So I said, Sure, no problem. As I started assembling it though, I realized that I was, I had accidentally fallen into writing a book and I said, Well, I could write a guide to self publishing even though I've only sold 150 books and I've been doing this for about 10 seconds, I'm sure I'm perfectly qualified on that.

That's how it started. I purely fell into a backwards. To be honest, it was a lot of luck involved. I was in the right place the right time. You know, some people like to hear from an expert with loads of experience on how to do something, and then some people find it more reassuring to almost have a beginner. You know, teaching the class, someone who's one step ahead of them, because sometimes they can speak to them. They can relate to them a bit more. Sometimes when you have a lot of knowledge on a subject, it could be difficult to explain it to a pure beginner. You almost know too much, you know. And I definitely didn't have that a problem in 2011 of knowing too much. I was perfectly positioned to to play that role. It was also the summer that self publishing started hitting the charts for the first time. It just, I was just in the right place at the right time.

Kate:                Basically, I mean to keep a blog going for this long and to grow it into an audience. I mean, like, yes, there's something about being in the right place at the right time, but you've done all the right things and kept it going. You are obviously no longer a beginner. You are now in that position where you maybe have too much knowledge. But you still have a passion for helping others and explaining, you know, various facets of the business and helping people along.

David:              A lot of my income comes from other authors recommending my books to authors who are starting out. You know, I've never lost sight of the fact that my whole career basically has been built on others. People helping me like I got a lot of breaks at the start from other authors, either, you know, giving me advice or featuring me on their blogs Or, or like when I release that first edition of my guide to self publishing, I think I realized my biggest weakness was that, you know, nobody knew who I was. I hadn't sold loads of books. So I decided to kind of counterbalance that by getting a lot of experience, successful self publishers, names that people might recognize to contribute to the book. And the amazing thing was that, I think I made a list of like, 35 authors, and I fully expected never to hear back from like, you know, half or 3/4. Um, I was thinking if I get five or six or seven of these guys to agree, that would be a win, and I think 32 of them agreed to countribute to the book. How am I gonna fit all these in now? I have to go to restructure the book a little because I wasn’t expecting to get that many people say yes.

This might have changed a little. Now things got a bit more bit bigger and a bit more kind of competitive between self publishers for various reasons. But certainly at the start there was a very strong feeling of community, possibly reinforced by that kind of us versus them dynamic with traditional publishing. But definitely there would be in self publishing itself, that dynamic was 100% positive, and it was all about lifting each other up. And, you know, we had a big enemy, so to speak, that we could all focus on the binds us kind of together on. We all help each other. There was never a sense of, a little bit now, of like pulling the ladder up afterwards, there was always a sense of reaching back and helping the next people come up. Some of that is down to the structural differences with traditional publishing and self publishing. 

It's not because we're nicer people or anything, but I think in traditional publishing, sometimes you're competing with your peers for limited slots like an agent might only take on a couple of authors a year. There's only so many books, a bookstore competing in the window. There's only so many books that's going to get the royal treatment from from a publisher. So you are, in a sense, kind of competing. You're competing for grants. Maybe you're competing for teaching slots. There's a lot of that, and there's very little of that – or at least there was, it has changed a little bit. And there was very little of that in self publishing . We realized early on that Let's say I find somebody else who also writes historical fiction set in Latin America. I don't think “competitor” straight away. I think that's that's a partner in crime, that’s somebody we can pool our audiences we can do newsletter swaps. Maybe we could do a box set, and maybe I can target him with my Amazon ads. You know, we don't... we just see possibilities when we see someone else writing in our space.

Kate:                I definitely find that in the indie world, people are very willing to share information, very open with numbers, which is shocking because in the traditional world it is like you don't talk numbers unless you're like on event and you’re in the bar. It's not something you would ever post like in a public forum and say, Oh, you know, my advance was this. And it's constantly done everywhere. People are so open and it's not bragging. It's meant to be like, you know, this is what I did. You can do it. You know? 

David:              It’s interesting about, to kind of ask the question of Who does that? Who is that helping? Who does it hurt? You know, I think we've all worked in offices where there was definitely an atmosphere of nobody discusses what they're earning and then ones where it was more open. And it certainly serves the paymaster’s interest to keep every in the dark about whatever anyone’s earning, whereas transparency, you know, that empowers authors, so maybe that's not. That's why it's not encourage so much.

Kate:                Publishing is a very small world, the traditional publishing world, I think all publishing, you know. Eventually everyone bumps into everybody else. Think there's this fear that it will get back to, your publisher or whoever and you'll be seen as, you know, the troublemaker.

Mindy:             I remember one of the things that my very first editor said to me, like on our call in our first phone call, our meet and greet, She was like, You don't talk about money, Don't tell other people how much you got paid and, you know, don't talk about money. And I was just like, Okay, you know, that's the... whatever you say. And now, um, I do now just because I do think that it's helpful for a lot of people. On the other thing is in the YA world in the traditional publishing world, my name is pretty well known. You have the opposite experience where people think I'm a bigger deal than I actually am. People recognize my name within the industry. In every day homes, I'm not a common name. So people think in the industry that I have greater sales or that I'm a bigger deal than I actually am. And so it's kind of funny when I do share numbers and they're just like, Oh. They are sometimes surprised I'm like, No, I am not as great as it may seem. 

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David:              I think it's probably getting more similar now in self publishing. I think in traditional publishing, the power curve is often so extreme that there's, you know, there's there's a thin slice atop that are earning like eye boggling numbers. And then, you know, that falls away quite quickly. And I think, especially with the changes over the last 10 years, with the midlist getting hollowed out quite a bit, that's probably accelerated. Self publishing is probably trending that way to a certain extent as well, which is probably inevitable. 

Mindy:             So if you were going to give an indie publisher a self publishing author, that was just starting out, if you're gonna give them one piece of advice, what would you, what would you tell them to do?

David:              Think very deeply about your ideal reader. And I think most people will be familiar with the concept from Stephen King's On Writing, where he talks about his wife Tabatha as his ideal reader and the person that they're writing for, and I think that's a very useful concept for the creative side. But I think it's also very useful for the publishing and marketing side of the business. 

One of the biggest mistakes that new authors make when they're starting out is that they want to tell everybody about their book. It's perfectly natural inclination, and usually we have friends or family or colleagues who want to support us by buying our book, and they don't realize how that can actually hurt them. That what you really want to do is solely focus your attention and your marketing on core readers in your genre. Like so much of discovery and visibility and sales, is now powered by algorithms. If you look at how Amazon works, it's always trying to figure out what kind of book you have and who it should recommend it to like.

The whole Amazon system is built around trying to recommend everyone the products that they're most likely to purchase, not the ones that make Amazon the most profit, or the ones that Amazon has the best relationship with. Like Amazon will happily recommend a 99 cent book over a 19.99 book, even though it makes them way less money. They'll happily do that to build up that kind of user trust, the relationship that people actually like the recommendations they get from Amazon.

But if you start off getting Bob from accounting and your uncle and all these other people who don't read, let's say you're publishing like a sweet romance and they don't read that kind of book. And but those kind of people are buying your book at the start. You're going to give Amazon a very, very muddled idea of who your true readers are and they will start recommending your book to all the wrong people. So people can make a mistake like this, right at the start of their career, not realizing you know what they have done. That kind of self sabotage just by, you know, giving into the natural inclination to share from the rooftops that you've got a new book.

Now I don't think, you know you should hide the fact necessarily, that they've written a book, but at the very start, those 1st 50 sales, it's crucial that they go to core readers in your genre on Amazon, because those 1st 50 sales are you know, what Amazon needs before it starts putting those also boughts on your book. I'm sure you've seen them on a book’s page. There's something like “customers who bought this also bought that,” we call those also boughts. Those 1st 50 sales are when Amazon's getting the first read of what kind of book you have. No, it won't see the couple clenching on the cover or the font choice that you’ve used. It's gonna be looking at the metadata, but it's also gonna be looking at Who's buying the book because that Amazon should be an indication of what kind of person we should be recommended to. So if all the wrong people are buying it. Then it's gonna start recommending your book to all the wrong people. And this is something, a mistake I've actually made personally myself. When I tried to try to market some of my historical fiction to my writer audience, I did that right at the launch, and it was like all the wrong idea of who The audience for that historical novel Was and started recommending it to people who wanted how to books on writing and market talk. That launch was a disaster.

So try and focus your marketing attention on your ideal reader exclusively, especially at the very start. And then, you know, you can tell your friends and family and colleagues maybe after a month or something that you have a book out. But at the start, don't try and lean on that. Just try and focus on core readers in your genre. 

Kate:                I’ve noticed, um, in the last, I don't know, maybe 2 to 3 weeks, maybe months, that when I look at my books on Amazon, my indie books the first row of books that are not advertised books instead of showing me, you know, readers who also bought it, saying, Here are some books that you may also like and it's based on my browsing. I know I looked at those books. Don't show them to me again. I want to see my also boughts. So what are they doing? 

David:              Amazon plays with that bit of real estate because it's an incredibly valuable real estate and it plays with it all the time. It's always doing experiments. Sometimes it slides in another row of ads there, and you get this horrific double row of ads on your book page. It's tried various different things in that slot and has done for as long as I can remember. There's just more public awareness at least among authors and when Amazon makes those changes these days, because people are starting to understand how important also boughts are and the whole kind of Amazon system.

Firstly, don't panic because it probably won't stick. It never does. Whatever change they make there. And the second reason not to panic is this is only a visual representation of the underlying system. And even if those also boughts disappear from your page forever, it doesn't change their impact on the whole recommendation engine, as I like to call it. It’d be equivalent to a sign post pointing towards a town disappearing. Now, it might be harder, might be a little harder for people to find the town, But the town itself hasn't disappeared so that there's no real reason to panic. You know, people will get there eventually.

I wouldn't panic too much about changes on your on your product page itself. The underlying system is what is important, and that system is still working away in the background. Whether those also boughts are on your page or no, that's just a visual representation to you. It doesn't actually affect the recommendations that are going out to customers. It doesn't affect the millions of emails that Amazon sending it with targeted recommendations to readers every day. It doesn't change the millions of recommendations they make on the website that are personalized for each individual reader every day. So that system isn't going away. There's no reason to worry about that.

Kate:                That's great advice, because I yeah, I would just think like, Oh, that's gone, So that's not a tool in your box anymore. But it is. I feel like anytime Amazon does anything, there's always a lot of, like chatter and discussion about it on all the different indie groups. And, like you said, indie authors are definitely more sensitive and more aware of all of those changes in a way, like we were talking about how traditional author our overlords are, You know, the Big Five and our publishers and stuff. And there's that power differential, but a little bit that exists with Amazon, because Amazon is just huge and so many people, all their income is in Amazon. All my indie books are in Kindle Unlimited, because that's where we make most of our money. I definitely do sometimes feel at the mercy of Amazon.

David:              Yeah, well, they have so much of the e book market in particular, not just in the US but like I think, US they are estimated to have, what, 70 75%? I don't think anyone has a very clear read on that. In the UK, it's even greater. It's 90% or more. So, like it is very important, Like if anything happens on Amazon has, you know, really noticeable effect on the livelihoods, of lots and lots of authors, self publishers in particular. I think everybody wants a healthy book sector with lots and lots of competitors.

But the other side of that is that Amazon has always given us a more level playing field. So that's why, in that sense, we've always had a kind of more positive disposition towards Amazon. There was always a feeling, now some of the other retailers might dispute this, and fair enough. But the feeling among self publishers and this is something I would agree with, is that Amazon has always made it easier for us to bootstrap our way to success. Like it always felt like a lot of the prime spots on the other retailers were being kept for Random House or Penguin or HarperCollins, whereas front tables on Amazon it feels like everyone has a shot of getting there and that, you know, nobody is particularly favored. Good luck picking the bones out of that. We have a lot of kind of conflicted in opinions about the whole thing. 

Kate:                I think that's one of the reasons I do like keeping, having that hybrid thing. It just makes me feel a little more able to pivot. So I don't feel like I'm totally beholden to publishers. I don't feel like I'm totally beholden to Amazon. I definitely still feel like I could be screwed at any minute because I do make my living making words.

David:              Well one thing that it gives me more confidence today about, you know, some massive structural shock coming, and it might just be virus related or economy related. There’s a lot of noise about breaking Amazon up, and but I feel a lot personally a lot more confident about weathering a storm like that now because I have a much larger mailing list. So I feel like OK, if Amazon went down tomorrow or stopped being an effective place for me to sell books that would hurt. But, I feel like I could put something together quicker or recover faster because I have a greater control of my platform. I have so many more of my readers on my mailing list or liking my Facebook page or whatever. And they like the unique advantage of email, as opposed to having lots of Twitter followers or Facebook likes or whatever else is that you 100% control that platform. Like with Facebook. You know, people are complaining that there's less organic reach. Twitter is a crapshoot over, You know, whether anyone ever sees your tweet or not, It seems you don't even really have the option there of dropping some cash in making sure that everybody see it. 

It doesn't really work so well with email. If something happens, I could just take my list on and walk like I did with MailChimp. When they jacked up their prices and changed their terms. I was just able to pull my list cause I own it and walk and you can't do that with Facebook. I can't... if Facebook suddenly, you know, doubles the price of their advertising or whatever, do something that messes with my business. I can't just take all my likes and leave. I can't download them, you know, and bring them over to a new social network. They don't allow you to do that cause I don't control that list. I don't control that territory whereas I do with my mailing lists, and that's very empowering. 

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Kate:                I wanted to ask one other thing. I can't remember if it was an email or a blog post of yours that I came across a while ago, but I thought it was really interesting because you talked about going viral. And pros and cons of that. What you could do with that, which seemed like your take away, was not much. But our last guest that we had, we talked about going viral in a bad way. When you get at the bottom of one of those Twitter pile ons. I've never gone viral. I've never been a person who everyone on Twitter decides to scream at. I actually don't really want either of those cause it terrifies me a little bit. What are your thoughts on going viral or on the Twitter pile ons? 

David:              What I was trying to address in that post is that going viral is something that people seem to want to engineer. And there's obviously negative effects to going viral, as your last guest would have, would have cover conclusively. But my take on it was a little bit different in that I think the danger in trying to engineer something like that and is that you'll start doing all the wrong things, right. 

So, for example, I had to build up a brand new Facebook page in January for my, because I republished all my historical fiction under a slightly tweaked version of my name. Just to separate everything out, I decided to start a fresh Facebook page just for historical fiction readers that wouldn't have my author audience mixed in and just so I could put a tailored content just for that channel specifically.

Now, if you want to build up a Facebook page quickly or get more likes or comments or shares, the easiest way to do that is to post pictures of cats or dogs are share memes. It's easy to fall into that trap because, you know, we're trying to talk about our books, we’re trying to talk about, you know, that the subject matter around the books, the research, or books we like, and those posts might get a few likes a few comments if you share and then you put up a puppy and things go wild, right? There's a picture of your daughter or or something like that, which is of general interest. And it's really easy for lots of people to like that photo, And that is really easy for you to start thinking. Well, I should do more content like that. But then one kind of audience area building up your, building up an audience of people who like puppies and cute photos of Children or whatever else. You're not building up an audience of people who are rabid fans of the kind of books that you write.

And that's what you gotta focus on, Not not this number chasing not, you know as much going viral as much as possible. You just want a, you want a narrow beam of content. And if it's turning off most people, that's great, because that means you're actually really zeroing in on the little, little niche that you want to target. And these days, the market is so big that you really need to drill down to the people who will respond most to your work and just exclusively target them. And in on your social channels, and in your emails, exclusively putting out the kind of content of these kind of people like, you know, not kind of content that everyone likes. The kind of people just these people like. And if most people don't enjoy us, that's fine. That's actually good for you because you don't want passengers on your email list, cause you'll end up paying from, and it'll affect your open rates.

And when you have lots of people not opening your emails, it even starts to affect the deliver ability of your email. So even the people who do want to get your emails might start not receiving them. And it’s the same on Facebook. Like a lot of people talk about how organic reach has been reduced dramatically. I think it's been reduced, but I don't think it's that dramatic like, because I now have such narrow beam of content on both my Facebook pages. And I don't make a cross the streams at all. I sometimes have engaged rates off 25% or 30%. Still, when people say that's been impossible for five years, maybe it is if you build up likes by posting memes all the time. But if you keep your content to that narrow beam of content, then you're gonna build up an audience that’s really, really responsive to that kind of content you're putting a.., Maybe it's harder work. Maybe it's a slower build, but it's ultimately I think, the best way to handle it.

Kate:                I've seen tweets that go viral and usually below it, the person will say something like, Oh, this tweet really blew up, buy my book! Once your tweet goes viral, you're supposed to like follow it up with a sales pitch. But I wonder how many people even click on that sales pitch link because I never do. I'm always like Oh, good for you. I'm like, funny tweet, moving on. 

David:              I've never had something like, you know, bo properly viral in in that sense, but I've had, like, kind of many, many viral sensations, if you like. I remember there was something during that terribly tiresome Amazon Hachette dispute a few years ago, and I wrote an article on and I think Stephen Fry retweeted it. And I got like, 40,000 people in the space of an hour coming to my website, which thankfully, didn't crash. But that’s kind of drive by traffic and I think it's the same with all viral traffic. It doesn't stick around. They don't subscribe to your blog. They don't check out your books, they don't buy. So chasing that traffic is really, really pointless, and it's actually self harming if it means that you're putting out content which isn't actually going to help you build a targeted audience of buyers of your work. 

Kate:                Don’t cast a wide net. Cast a small, finely-knit net. 

David:              Like Barbie trying to catch a butterfly or something.

Mindy:             Thank  you so much. I really appreciate all of your time.

David:              Thanks for inviting me!

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From Film to Book: A Screenwriter Talks Novel Adaptation

Mindy: Welcome to Writer Writer Pants on Fire, where authors talk about things that never happened to people who don't exist. We also cover craft, the agent hunt, query trenches, publishing, industry, marketing and more. I'm your host, Mindy McGinnis. You can check out my books and social media at mindymcginnis dot com and make sure to visit the Writer Writer Pants on Fire blog for additional interviews, query critiques and more at WriterWriterPants on Fire.com

Mindy:             This summer I'm adding a co-host, fellow author Kate Karyus Quinn. We'll be doing a series that focuses on hybrid and indie authors. If you're thinking of going the Self Pub route we've got authors who found success with six figure sales, as well as authors who are just starting out on the road to indie publishing. Learn from them. Learn with us.

Today's guest is William Schreiber, William’s novel, Someone to Watch Over, won the 2019 Rising Star award from the Women’s Fiction Writers Association. The novel is based on his original screenplay, which has won or been nominated for many awards, including the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences’ Nicholls Fellowship in screenwriting.

Mindy:             We are recording this on July 2nd, and it has been 90 degrees here in Ohio for about a week. It's hot and miserable, and when I turn on the computer, everything, everyone everywhere, seems to be miserable. 

Kate:                 Do they sell fireworks in Ohio?

Mindy:             Only certain things are illegal. So I don't know how hard it is enforced. With my little puppy, dude, my little puppy dude friend I have to be careful with fireworks this year, so I'm probably... My family doesn't really do anything for the fourth. 

Kate:                You don’t have a big self fireworks show?

Mindy:             My cousin used to have and I'm sure it was illegal. He used to have a huge, huge firework show, but they have a baby now, so they're not really doing that. And I've got a puppy go anyway.. 

Kate:                We in New York used to be illegal for all kinds, like nothing was sold here. And so we would get these flyers in the mail or this fireworks place that's just over the border in Pennsylvania and people would go down Pennsylvania, load up on fireworks. So even though it was illegal to buy them, people would have tons of fireworks in their front yards. And like people were not hiding it. I think two years ago here in New York, not like, I guess, not the big, big ones, but like the basic ones and sparklers and stuff.  so and it's also expensive, like when people are like setting off fireworks for an hour like, I can’t believe how much money people were literally setting on fire. 

Mindy:             For a long time we couldn't get certain fireworks, and I never really had any. And my ex his family was from West Virginia and you can do anything in West Virginia. 

Kate:                I think that's what their state motto it is.

Mindy:             It's actually wild and wonderful, but it means the same thing. 

Kate:                That’s crazy, that you know that.

Mindy:             Yeah, His family brought a bunch of, um, fireworks to me one time, and, you know, I never used it because, like I said, I don't want to set myself on fire. I have set myself one for multiple times. I don't need to keep doing it.

Kate:                You would totally be the person who would get like, a faulty firework and be like, Hey, guys, I'm typing this with one hand. I'm still learning to type with my other hand when I only have three fingers laughed and we'd be like all, Mindy set herself on fire again.

Mindy:             Well, and I need all my fingers as you're saying, I type for a living. My sister asked me the other day. How's the typing going? And then she just kind of stopped. I'm sorry. I mean, how's the writing going? And I'm like, No, you're right. It's like that's what I do for a living. I type I type for a living, but yeah. I had these fireworks from West Virginia that I was just like, I don't know what to do with these. And then So, like my niece’s friend, who is also a cousin of mine, high school girl, was over. And I know her parents, and I was just like, Hey, you want these fireworks? And she was like, yeah sure. So her Mom texted me like an hour later and she's like, Hey, uh, are these legal? And I was like, I don't know are from West Virginia and she takes me back. She's like, I googled him. They're totally illegal. And I'm like, Hey, send your kid over again next time we'll send her home something else illegal! You'll never know! 

Kate:                So did they end up using them or not? 

Mindy:             Oh, they used them. I mean, it's it doesn't matter where we live out in the middle of nowhere. So yeah, and then she sent me video of them. She's like we set off the fireworks, and I’m like that’s cool, thanks. A little bit of joy in my life.

Speaking of joy and trying to find something positive, there's a podcast that I came across called The Melanin Project. It had an episode that I thought was particularly poignant for me in the moment because she was talking about imposter syndrome. So the whole podcast is about positivity and self love and just feeling better about yourself, period, which we all freakin need right now. And she did an episode about imposter syndrome, and I thought it was really interesting because I know so many authors, some of them extraordinarily famous and extremely talented. They really do attribute their success to a fluke, right time, right place, kind of thing. And that is an element. But you know, you don't get to be where you are simply by luck alone and and so many people, authors, especially that I know, do suffer from impostor syndrome and it made me... the episode made me think about that because I do it too, all the time when I'm talking to people, I'm talking about writing, I'll be like, yeah, imposter syndrome. You know, I got lucky with my debut, and I got lucky with my editor and my house, and all of those things are true. But I also got them through talent, perseverance and hard work.

So it made me think, it made me think just about imposter syndrome and and taking a little more credit in my life for the things that I have accomplished. But then also, I had to laugh. I don't know if I've ever told you this story, Kate, but I was on a panel with a very famous white, older white male actor. The question of imposter syndrome came up from the audience that people ask. You know, does anyone here, does anyone on the panel, suffer from imposture syndrome? And someone had to explain to him what imposter syndrome was. 

Kate:                Oh, to be a white male.

Mindy:             Yeah, he was just like, he, was very sweet. I'm not going to say who it was because he was very sweet. Very kind. 

Kate:    But still, that's a level of privilege.

Mindy:             Absolutely. It was super funny because he genuinely like looked up and down on the panel was like, I'm sorry. What? What is Imposter syndrome? I've never heard of this.

Kate:                Oh, my God. Wow.

Mindy: I was like, Well, I guess when you're born that good looking …

Kate                 Yeah, it must be so nice. 

Mindy:             Anyway, it was just funny and listening to that episode made me think of that. 

Kate:                So you actually mentioned this podcast to me a couple weeks ago because I've been painting my house. We're getting ready to put on the market. We actually just did it today. It's on the market, it’s on Zillow. 

Mindy:             So you did all the positivity you can find, selling a house. 

Kate:                Like, I've been doing lots of painting, and so I you know, it just gets very, very tedious, painting. You know, One coat, two coat. Does it need a third coat?  You're looking at it. And so, um yeah, So I listened to an episode, and it was right around the time when the protest, were really going strong. A couple weeks ago, the episode was about Black Lives Matter, and it was a great podcast to listen to that, because so many voices that I think, that I hear are more media savvy individuals. And this felt more like a person on the street reacting and giving you their feelings about it.

And the episode actually started. Well, it starts first with the theme song, which is amazing. It immediately went into a clip of President Obama, and I believe it was from a commencement speech that he had just given And hearing His voice was like such a soothing feeling like it was like a feeling of being safe. Like when you're like, a kid and you're driving home somewhere late at night. And your parents are talking softly and you're in the back seat of the car and you just feel like safe and you fall asleep. Like that was how it felt like I was like, I want to be that kid again year, You know, I want to believe that everything was going to be okay.

Mindy:             Yeah, you need a bumper sticker. Obama's my co pilot.

Kate:                I want him to be the pilot, though! I want him to be the pilot again. 

Mindy:             True.

Kate:                All right. God. And then the host of the show, she you know, she talked a little bit about it. And what Black Lives Matter means to her and then she had this really great guest that talked about raising Children, specifically raising black Children and how to, you know, raise them to be proud of who they are. And so it's just really interesting to hear from that point of view, because I, um a very white white lady. I live in a very white suburb and, you know, I don't want to be trapped in this this white bubble. You know, I need more windows in my life, and I need more access to other people and, you know, outside of just my own experiences, because I think that's, you know, that's a big part that's missing for a lot of people.

Mindy:             That's the truth. My cousin, a different cousin. I have many, many, many cousins. So my cousin and his wife are an interracial couple. And so their child, of course, is mixed race, and they live in an area that is, you know, super diverse. And they have that ability for their child to have a diverse experience in being raised. However, he's young. I think he's like five. He's a sweetheart. And unfortunately, the news and everything you know, little, little guy he didn't he didn't know racism was a thing. Like he didn't know about it. And of course, that's everything that we're talking about and dealing with right now. And so my cousin and his wife had to talk to their little boy about why some white people hate black people. And they were like, Yeah, that, you know, it sucked. It was really hard. And that particular episode, I can see that being really useful. 

Kate:                I know it's such a hard thing to have these discussions, and, you know, we've been talking to my kids and explaining what's going on. And, you know, my kids are just like, That's stupid. Why are people acting like that? And I'm like, Well, guys, there's a lot of history, So we're reading a lot and we're reading All American Boys together as a family is like sort of having a discussion about it. Yeah, it's so good. So far. So we’ll, we pass the book around, and we all read a chapter and then we discuss it, and so.

Mindy:             For those of you that don't know, um, All American Boys is an amazing YA novel by Jason Reynolds and his co author Brendan Kylie. They're both wonderful men, lovely people to know and talk to. So definitely if you're looking for something to talk with your Children about about what is going on here today, All American boys is wonderful.

Kate:                And it’s a YA book just to be clear. It is a YA book. Um, my daughter is only 10. My son just turned 13 and there is talk about drinking and stuff. But, you know, I just, I just feel like it's all an opportunity for a conversation with your kids, you know, because I was just like, you know, some kids in high school do drink. But a lot of kids also don't. We just try and talk to our kids so much that they're like, Please stop. 

Mindy:             All American Boys. That's a good one. Definitely. And also, if you're looking for something for yourself, check out The Melanin Project. It is for adults. There is language. Just FYI for anybody that might want to share it with their kids. You go for it if you want to. Just FYI there's language. I mean, I have language here, so I assume if you're listening, you don't mind, but so I wanted to throw that out there. 

Also, I have created a Facebook page for the blog and podcast. Yes, Kate had a great idea. Kate has been pushing me to do this for a while. I haven't done it because I have way too much on my plate. And this particularly week when I've had the most that I've ever had on my plate, I decided I should do it. So, I have created a Facebook page for Writer Writer Pants on Fire. So just search Writer Writer Pants on Fire and give us feedback. Let me know what you think of the blog. Let me know what you think of the podcast. Let me know if there's someone you would like To have as a guest, and I will try to get them. Let me know if there's a certain topic that you would like to see addressed and more importantly, if you have a specific question if you have something you would like to ask about writing about publishing something that you've tried to look for information on and then when you look at it your like, but that's not quite exactly my situation. Go ahead and ask me. Ask me on the Facebook page and I will try to get to everyone here in the pre-chat before we roll into our guests.

Kate:                People used to comment on blogs a lot, but do you get a lot of comments on your blog any more?

Mindy:             No. Never. People. People don't interact on blogs anymore, which is fine. I mean, they used To. I do feel a little lonely sometimes over there on the blog. Um, but I started doing more. I do my interviews, as always. And, of course, which just to remind everybody - Saturday Slash – I do free query critiques on the Writer Writer Pants on Fire blog.

Kate:                Awesome! Awesome Amazing author offer! 

Mindy:             It’s an author offer! So yeah, free query critiques on the blog. Go to blog. Writer, Writer, Pants on Fire dot com, you can find the blog  and the podcast. Visit the Facebook page

Kate:                And transcripts of the podcast on the blog! 

Mindy:             Yes, absolutely. There are transcripts of every episode. And let me tell you guys, that is a pain in my ass. So if you're not, you know...

Kate:                I also convinced you about that.

Mindy:             That was also Kate's idea So if you're not using them, tell me and I will stop putting 3 to 4 hours into every single one of those posts.

Kate:                Yeah, I told you because I like to sometimes read podcasts instead of listening, and because it's faster. 

Mindy:             It’s mostly really good for my SEO. But I'm just like, ah, and I agree with all of those statements. And then while I'm doing it, I'm like, God damn it, Kate. So everybody let me know, Go to the Facebook page and tell us, Tell us people you want to hear about, things you want to talk about, questions that you have That's about it. Today's guest. We’ve got something a little bit different for you. William Schreiber. We have an award winning screenwriter today. We try to bring you something that's maybe a little bit different. Couple weeks ago, we had the creator of Pictionary. So today we're having on William Schreiber, who is a successful screenwriter. 

William:          My name is William Schreiber. I am a screenwriter and novelist that lives in Seattle. I also freelance. I have a journalism background. I graduated from University of Florida College of Journalism. 

Mindy:             The freelance life. We'll talk about that for a second, because I do freelancing as well. I do some work for hire and I do writing gigs and, uh, gig work stuff like that. I love it like, personally, I enjoy it, but it's always funny. I always tell people when I go to like, let's say, get a loan from the bank or something like that And they're like So you know, we need your tax returns for the last two years. And how much money do you think you'll make next year? And I'm like, I have no idea. 

William:          Right?

Mindy:             And they're just like What? What do you mean that I'm like, I have no idea, Guys, It's like I could make $100,000. I could make $5000. I could make nothing. Like I just I don't know. Can you talk about that freelance, freelance gig economy lifestyle? That would be, that would be great.

Kate:                Can I just say something, I just talking about getting a loan. We just yesterday we were in the beginning stages of trying to sell our house and buy a new house. So we talked yesterday to the mortgage guy who we used When we bought this house, he was like, Now, Kate, what do you do again? And I said, I'm a writer and he goes, Oh, yeah, that's right. Oh, that's so cool. And then he's like, You know what your yearly income about? And I was like, I never know. Yeah, And he was like, so less cool from this vantage point of getting us a loan. So, um, yeah, it's everyone thinks that cool when you're writer and then like, they hear the money side of it. And it's like, Uh yeah, that's right. 

William:          Yeah, well, when I was in journalism college, you know, Journalism 101 If you're pursuing a journalism degree in order to make a lot of money, you are in the wrong field. That's the first thing. So it's true, you know? I mean, freelancing is tough because it's a constant churn of finding work, doing the work, and, you know, it's it's kind of like film development, where you have projects at different places in the development process, and you have to go out and get another one to put in the pipe while you're in the middle of the pipe on one project and ending the pipe on another project.

So it's it's a lot of work. The pipe has gotten bigger because of all of the online freelance marketplaces. People who need writers and writers who need work cand find each other. Um, like I'm on a site called Up Work, and I like the freelancing that I like to do. I really like to have a a connection to it, you know, so I can put my heart into it. And ah, a lot of the writing I'm doing are for clients who have a social conscience and are involved in social equity and in clean energy and in using technology to help people who wouldn't necessarily be able to afford that technology with without some intervention of some kind. I really enjoy it. If you're going to be a writer, you have to love it too, right? No matter what, and that's that's kind of where I am. I just love helping tell stories that I, that I believe in, you know, particularly when it's kind of work for hire situation.

Kate:                I know, actually, a lot of people who have come to write fiction through starting in journalism where they worked for a newspaper or something. And I always think like that's actually a great background for writing. And when I was, you know, I've always wanted to be a writer, but when I I was ah, youngster, you know, I thought, Oh, you know and I was looking at majors. I thought, I don't want to do journalism because I don't want to write nonfiction like I don't you know, I don't want to write truth. The stuff I just want to write fiction and tell stories. But now, with age and wisdom and I'm a huge newspaper reader - journalist tell stories they're just telling with facts. And when you're reading, you know, a really great writer, the bigger newspapers and the way they shape a story and the way they tell it. And you know, when they find that perfect last line at the end a story. It's It's a craft as much as fiction, and I think it's it makes you a stronger writer overall, right?

William:                      Yes, I agree. The return to close ending, Um, I was kind of the same way going into journalism school, I thought, I really want to write about people, you know, I want to write about human interest. And so the University of Florida had, you know, you could decide on, a newspaper track or a magazine track. And I took the magazine track. Um, because it allowed me to kind of follow that interest in writing more about people and about events and about life. And, um, you know, human interest, rather than covering um, you know, mosquito Control board meetings in Florida. What's really great about a journalism background, I think in terms of translating into, you know, writing fiction or screenplays is the ability to learn how to research. Research is so important, I think, in injecting verisimilitude or believability, plausibility into stories. You know why somebody would do something or why a situation is the way it is. So I think journalism is, It is a really strong background for this type of writing. 

Mindy:             I agree. And I want to go back to what you were saying about the Internet, opening up a whole new venue for freelancers and for gig economy workers. My cousin, she actually lives in Portland she does video editing, her husband is a cameraman. And now, of course, with Covid 19 The film and TV industry has just like ground to a halt. Hopefully, they're able to pick up again soon, but they just went cold turkey. Nothing's being produced on, and my cousin, because she's a video editor, got plenty of jobs. And they're kind of, not high on the hog, but they're able to scrape by editing little videos for the Internet. 

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So I was asking her like, What are you doing? And she's, like, Do you know those videos where it's like put in a cup of almonds and then a cup of sugar? Stir it counterclockwise? And you just see the hands moving. She's like, Yeah, I'm doing those and she’s like - its work So she's like it is the most boring work, and I hate it, but I'm getting paid. I just think it's super interesting. Um, how the Internet has changed and I want to come back to to what you were saying about your having the choice as a journalism major, newspaper or magazine route. Does that option still exist? Because print in the journalism world, my ex, my ex was a photographer and it was just everything collapsed. It just didn't exist anymore. I’m curious about that journalism major that you the program that you went through versus what a program would look like today? Do you have any thoughts on that?

William:          Yes, I know the University of Florida. They they have pivoted, you know, along with traditional journalism into digital media and social media in a big way and actually have agencies there that are student run and students staffed. Do actually do projects, you know, as part of their work. And it's very much, of course, you know, going online and social media. But we need to not lose sight of the fact that facts matter and good reporting matters. And no matter the the platform, no matter the the outlet, that content needs to be as solid as it ever has been.

Kate:                I was thinking about that when you said, you know, they tell you it's your first thing they told you at school was don't do journalism if you want to make a ton of money, and I feel like, you know, we're in a time when the media is so villainized. And I I'm always saying like the media is not like this conglomerate. It's like people who went to school because they they want to tell the truth like they want to, like, find out what's going on. And want people know like the true story of what's happening. Like That's their passion in life.

William:          You know, journalism is called the fourth estate of this country and without somebody to keep those in power accountable. I'm sorry. But unchecked power and human nature, left to its own devices is not a pretty thing.

Mindy:             I think that the long and bloody and horrible history of the Roman emperors is a great example, especially the Julio Claudians. I am kind of a geek when it comes to just this certain, about 100 years of Roman history and...

William:          The Julio Claudians. Yes, of course. 

Mindy:             Yes, of course. You would know who they are if I use, if I use their names So like Nero, Nero, Caligula, Claudius, all of them, those those dudes, you know, they were just batshit crazy like by the - Claudius being the exception, more than likely - but they were just batshit crazy. And there's all these different theories about, you know, the family had epilepsy, and they have probably had repeated seizures and had brain injuries because of it. And that's totally possible. But a lot of behavioralists are just like, no, they had unchecked power. They could have anything they wanted to any time and mentally, that's just, that's not going to produce a functioning human being, right? 

William:          There is a reason that absolute power corrupts is a truism. 

Kate:                Let’s talk about screenwriting! 

Mindy:             Let's not talk about Roman Emperors anymore. 

Kate:                You were a finalist for Nichols?

William:          I Was a Quarterfinalist, which was the top 5% of the Nicholls Fellowship competition. I've actually had three top 3/4 finalist one drama, which was this as a film, is considered a drama. The book, um, a comedy, which I learned was kind of unusual for the academy to the rate of comedy in their world and an action thriller. So, yeah, I played in that sandbox for a while.

Kate:                For listeners who don't know, the Nichols is an extremely, I would say, the most prestigious screenwriting award that there is. Basically, Would you agree with that assessment? 

William:          I would agree with that assessment. I think it's the most competitive screenwriting competition in the world, and I've been involved in a number of them and have, you know, like in the, in the book world, you you learn which ones are paid attention to and which ones aren't. Um, I think Austin is another one that's gets a lot of attention. The Austin Film Festival.

Kate:                So can you talk about how you, What was your journey into screenwriting? What made you decide To go in that direction and decide to tell stories in that way.

William:          After college, I worked in at a magazine in South Florida, and then I became the editor of the University of Florida magazine, and I was there for five years. And then, ah, I met my wife there. We got married and we moved to Georgia, where I started freelancing for the first time after kind of being on a staff. And a producer friend of mine in Florida had a director who needed a screenplay for a film idea he had, and it was essentially, a coming of age, family adventure comedy about a big city kid from New York who comes down to a small Florida beach town and learns how to follow his dreams from a band of, ah, kind of comical retirees on the beach. They were lead by Ernest Borgnine, which was a lot of fun. 

Mindy:             Um wow. 

William:          Yeah. And I wrote the screenplay, never having written a screenplay before and just kind of followed my instincts. Um, kind of for music theory, actually. And storytelling. You know, I think we all have a sense of of rhythm and stories, and we know. Okay, well, something needs to happen here. Otherwise, you know, it's boring. Um, so I wrote the screenplay, you know, based upon kind of a song writing approach where there are movements, you know, whether you're talking about an orchestra or or even a pop song, you know, verse, chorus, bridge. You set up expectations, um, with certain chord progressions. And if you don't meet those expectations that creates tension. Um, so I had the good fortune of writing that screenplay was my first screenplay was produced. Which was a blessing and a curse.

Kate:                Wow, that's pretty rare. Did you read any screen writing books cause screenwriting is, I Don't Want to say technical. I mean, there's a lot of formatting, but also there's, you know, just the interior, the exterior, the slug lines... 

William:          I read about how to format it, and it looked extremely tedious to me. So I bought a piece of software Movie Magic screenwriter. 

Kate:                I have that too. 

William:          I worked in that program for years, and, ah, with a couple of key presses, you can move between all of those various elements of sluglines and screen description and character and dialogue. And yes, 

Kate:                It's so much easier. 

William:          Gets all that technical stuff out of the way, you know, so you can just kind of get a flow going. So that's what I did. I found that program, and that's what I, that's what I use. And it took care of all of that. 

Mindy:             As a non screenwriter person over here. Can you explain what a slug Line is? 

William:          It’s whether it's an exterior or an interior shot and then what the shot is. And then typically the time of day, for example, Interior Craftsman House Day. Okay, then you just you know, you have a few lines of description as to what the camera sees what's happening and then, you know, you bring your characters in.

Kate:                The hardest thing with the screenplay is that there's no, you know, with the novel you have, it's a lot of interiority, You know, you have all the characters thoughts, and you can explain things. You know why they make this leap to fall in love with someone or their thoughts and how they get from one thing to the next. And on a screenplay. It all has to be visual, and you have To use visuals and, you know, make it visually interesting, the story and also communicate everything through visuals unless you kind of cheat a little bit and use voice over. 

William:          That was part of the transition that I had to go through in terms of transitioning from telling that story as a screenwriter to telling it as a novelist, because I've come to realize that screenwriting is writing from the outside in and novel writing is writing from the inside out. You should stick with one P O V. You know, unless you, you build in a transition and you can't jump POV's, whereas a camera is all over the place, you know, it’s all POV changes. 

Kate:                It's funny, I I'm a big romance reader and I will sometimes go back and read old school romances that I read when I was younger. The old school romance authors used to do a lot of head hopping. I don't know if that's a newer rule.

Mindy:             That's a really good question, because I have noticed that as well. I do editorial work on the side, and every now and then it's like, I'll flag someone, you’re head hopping. You can't do that. And then and then I'm like, Well, I mean, who says? Who says you can’t? Only we've been, We've been taught that that you can't head hop. But I do think that is somewhat a new phenomenon. 

Kate:                With third person. I'm always like trying to tell people, like usually with third person unless you that omniscient Narrator It's usually close third person.

William:          I think that Someone To Watch Over was probably a good story to start with as a novelist. It's my first book and there are two main characters, a brother and a sister, so it wasn't like there was a whole ensemble that you have go between. 

Kate:                So how long did you spend with screenwriting? And then what made you decide to switch to writing a novel? And why was it this story that you wanted to tell as a novel, as opposed to as a screenplay? Do you think some stories are better told in one format or another?

William:          I do think some stories air better for the screen than they are for the Page. My journey with this was, you know, it was a screenplay that was getting some traction, you know, up until 2008, when the economy collapsed and financing went away. And independent shingles, you know, if the studios shuttered and have never come back and there was consolidation among, you know, the studios and on top of everything else, you know, Hollywood was, ah, polarized by a writer strike right about the same time.

The headwinds were just immense. I set it aside for a while and worked on some other things I continued to screenwrite. Got an agent in L. A. This is a small, character driven, intimate, you know, family saga drama, and that's not really a studio type of of story unless you can get, you know, a Laura Dern and a Jason Bateman in a package, you know, people are going to be confident in. And so she shops some of my larger stuff, which got great response. You know, we love the writing, it’s just not what we're looking for. I know that we all deal with rejection, and there, there was, you know, there is a lot of rejection, but you just to have to push through it. And you have to do it for the love of the writing, which I do. Nobody likes rejection.

Kate:                And It's so hard to get those. We love the writing, but this just isn’t right for us rejection. And I have gotten those before and oh... 

William:          You can die of encouragement in Hollywood.

Mindy:             I can't, I can't even imagine. Some of my family is involved in the film industry, as I said earlier, and - die of encouragement, that, that's about right. I mean, they oh, pulled their hair out. And I can't, I mean, I can't even imagine. I'm very pleased to be on the end of entertainment that I am on, even though it has some pitfalls and definitely is stressful. It is not film, and I am so glad. 

I have talked To so many people cause I've sold rights to film rights to a few of my books. And I have stopped announcing that. I have stopped telling fans when I sell rights, because then all they want to know is  - when’s the movie being made? And it's like, Is your movie out yet? And the answer is, Well, the answer is no and probably never. Like this is just how it works, right? I don't know what the percentage is, but the amount of books that are, the rights that are purchased that are actually turned into film is probably less than 1%. Like it's tiny. And, um, part of me very much resents the idea that having a movie made out of your book is like a step up. It's like graduating or an improvement. It's just like, No, the book itself is an end product. I'm a writer. This is what I'm proud of. 

William:          Therein is why I wrote the book. It's an end product. That screenplay is a mile short of how it is supposed to be experienced by an audience, and I got to the point where this the screenplay, got such great response. You know in film festival competitions where it won this, that and the other thing. And so, I knew I had a story that resonated with people, and I wanted to get it out to more people, and it wasn't gonna happen at that time. So I said, You know what? The book world, Mindy, I have to tell you, you are exactly right. The book world is so much more inviting and welcoming of stories because there's so much, so many more pipelines in so many more audiences that you know are looking for stories. And that's why I wanted to see this story in its final format and to be experienced in the way that it should be experienced in that format. 

Kate:                I've heard a screenplay explained as, It's a blueprint. It's like a blueprint for a house. I, um, actually just had a middle grade graphic novel come out that I co-wrote with a friend. It was released with DC In April. Actually, knowing screenwriting was really helpful for writing a graphic novel, and it's a very similar process because my co-author and I were, we wrote it. But we had an artist, you know who did the art. We, you know, saying what the visual should be, and we're having the dialogue. But she really her art really made it come alive. And, you know, you know, brought it to life, right? 

William:          Yes. I mean, again, you know, a screenplay is Ah, it's just the start of a long journey. And there are so many potholes along the way in terms of, you know, it's a fickle business, and anything can change until it's actually, you're rolling. Principal photography. All bets are off. 

Kate:                Did you ever consider, um, trying to direct it yourself, putting on that indie producer director hat? 

William:          At the time, I, uh I didn't think that I had the ability because I didn't. I had never done that before. I didn't have the ability to make it into the best film, it could be because, you know, it takes a team, um, of people who are skilled in in a lot of different areas. So I mean, I toyed with that a little bit in the, you know, the voice in the back your head says when you're going after financing - Well, what have you done? Nothing but trust me, you know? Yeah, nothing to sell. I wanted the material to be, to be done, and in the best way it could possibly be done. And I didn't think I was the person for that. 

Kate:                I think that was probably a good choice on your part. If you don't have a passion to direct and you don't see it, then I think a lot of times with creative fields, people look and they think I could do that. You know, everyone thinks they can write a novel. Everyone thinks they could do it. And it's like, Well, try, you know, if you feel strongly, you know, it’s definitely harder than it looks. 

Mindy:             I have so many people say to me, I've always wanted to write a book. I'm like, OK, go do it. 

William:          As a screenwriter. You know, you've, you've seen the movie a 1,000,000 times in your head and it will never be as perfect as it is in your head. And I think if you, unless you approach it as a director, it could be really difficult because you want to get the perfect shot that you see in your head and the clock is ticking and you have a schedule and we're getting behind schedule. We've got three more set ups to do today.

Kate:                You also hear the characters in your head of how they say something. And I have that problem with a short that I directed at film school. I received, like, an award so that they gave me money to direct a film. I would have fights with one of my not fights, but, like arguments within my actresses, she would, you know, say, Oh, I don't think it should be delivered this way. And I'd be like, Well, it should. 

Mindy:             Similarly, I don't listen to my own audio books because I know what characters sound like. I know how that line is delivered and my audiobooks are excellent. Everyone has told me their awesome, one of them, even won an award. And I'm like, That's cool. Plus, It's like I know what happens. I'm not gonna waste my time listening to the story.

So let's talk about the movement of bringing your story from the, you talked about why you chose to transpose it from a screenplay into a novel. What is the actual process like? What is what does that work look like? 

William:          Kate referenced it before. You know, screenplays are all about structure. So a screenplay, you know, typically, unless you're Quentin Tarantino, are it's a three act structure. And so I had a three act structure screenplay from which to work so well it provided, you know, a pretty detailed outline. And I was relieved to learn that, you know, a lot of novels are written in three act structure. So I took the screenplay and I actually had the screenplay here in front of me, and I started writing from one page onto the other inward and just I knew that I had to create the film that I saw in my head when I wrote the screenplay, and I've always been described as a very visual writer. You know, people who have read my screenplay say, Oh, I can see that. I saw the movie. And so that was very helpful in the novel world, because that's what you have to do. So I just literally went from, you know, page to page and ended up with a very crappy first draft. 

Kate:                That's what a first draft is supposed to be. 

William:          Well, good. I did it right then. 

Kate:                Yes. Yeah, that's a perfect first draft. It's bad, actually.

William:          I realized that there were things that I didn't know about. You know how to do this.

Kate:                How long was your first draft? Can I ask that? Was it super short? 

William:          How long, Like word count. It was about 85,000 words. 

Kate:                So it turned out long. And how long was, how many pages was the screenplay? 

William:          Screenplay was about 110 pages. 

Kate:                So, you obviously you found ways to fill in those blanks spaces and really add a lot. So did you add more Plot? Did you, or did you just...  Is that all the - I'm gonna go for it again – interiority?

William:          I discovered more things about Lenny and about John and about their back story. When you're given, you know, more range to work, the story can become broader and deeper. And character has always been the main focus for me in an approach to a story and what is character but the sum of their past? That is, they are. And so I was able to explore much more of her past, and I discovered that Lenny's mother died giving birth to her, which set her on a path from the beginning that was going to be a rocky one. And in the movie we know that her mother died, but we don't know how, we know the mother absent. And so I discovered that piece and it became a new thread in the story that I still hope to get the film made that I need to go back and weave into the screenplay.

But it was that kind of discoverability and the characters leading the places that allowed me to explore more of their interiority. The main problem I had when I found an editor and and ah, you know, it was kismet, that I found an editor in Montreal who just connected with this story, and I think that's so important to find an editor. Whatever it is an editor, an agent who gets your writing and kind of connects with, and she helped me to transition from approaching it as a screenwriter to a novelist, and it was a lot of POV issues. It's kind of a master class of learning how to maneuver that element of of novel writing. Yeah, so a godsend. 

Kate:                Just for listeners, I think it would be interesting. Could you, like, tell us how the very first scene or the opening of the screenplay translates into the opening of the novel?

William:          I could actually read the opening scene of the screenplay a little bit and then read the opening pages of the book. Is that? 

Mindy:             Oh, yeah, that would be great. 

William:          I’ll just read the first page of the screenplay. Is that good, or how long do you think—

Mindy:             That's great. 

William:          Exterior. Great Smoky Mountains Vista. Dawn. A peal of a distant church bell echoes through densely peaks framed by an awakening sky. Exterior, fog shrouded brick historic district, Dawn. The sound of the tolling bell closer now plays off antebellum brick buildings in the flinty foothills, home to tourist shops in the charming town square of Tennessee. Discover the bell and a steeple adorned with a host of heavenly angels and lovely stained glass windows. A glow in the soupy fog below a low 1980s Chrysler Cordoba sags in front of a former Civil War church, now a quaint bookstore called A Likely Story. It's angelic bell tower rising over the car. Interior. Chrysler Cordoba. Dawn. Slender legs raw with carpet burns, a blood flecked white magnolia crushed in the chaos of a woman's dark shoulder length hair. This is Eleanor Lenny Fields, 40. She's curled on the age tracked back seat and a tasseled sundress, her lavender polished toes clenched into little fists.

A cop suddenly at the window, hand on his gun. He wiped away dew shines his powerful mag lite. Inside, he tries the door. locked, watch his mag lite on the window, and Lenny sits bolt upright, a sweat soaked storm on her face. She sucks for air tries to get her manic bearings. She's probably pretty, if not for the red hot abrasion that weeps on her cheek and her left eye plum, purple swollen. She cracks the window an inch and says, “I'm good. I'm good.” Her soft Southern accent is all she'd recognize of herself at this moment. 

“I need you to unlock the door, ma'am.” She takes an uncertain moment to process that. Finally, she lifts the handle, pushes it open looks at the bookstore, she says. “I work here right there.” The cops says, “A likely story?” “Yes, sir, I read to the kids in the summer program.” She turns away and shame as his flashlight beam flashes her battered face and we match cut to the next scene.

William:          So that's how it read on the screenplay page. It takes a little longer to unfold, of course. In the book. 

A noise grated inside Lenny Riley's head when she flexed her jaw inside the station wagon. Grains crunched between her teeth, sand. Her mouth was bitter, dry as a bloody desert. As her thirst welled up, something gurgled, her lungs rising and falling. A bell tolled low and slow somewhere. She willed her eyes open, and the dimness would appear to be a swath of skin hanging overhead came into focus, but the ripped roof liner. She was curled in the cargo area bruised from her sweaty skin, toast clenched into stubby fists. Rolling onto her side, she stretched her legs. She couldn't remember falling, as a sharp clack clack clack on the glass next to her head instinctively sent her skittering into the opposite corner like a spooked deer.

From the outside. The car we hear. “Yeah, dispatch. She's moving.” She recorded the sound of a man's muffled voice outside as she glanced at the window to which she had scrambled. She was startled by something in a peripheral vision. What was that? Her brain registered a glimpse of something or someone there and gone. The disorienting instant was avalanche by a rapid succession of sensory assaults. Her cheek burned, heavy air, weight on her lungs, scraped legs. Swept a glance around the cage space found her turquoise died cowboy boots tossed on the other side. They instantly anchored her in the moment that she clung to the sight of them.

“I need you to open the door.” She squinted into a glaring flashlight outside as her sense of self preservation kicked into high gear. Police. Fractured thoughts converged as she unlocked the tailgate. “I'm okay,” she said in the strongest tone she could muster. The lilted Southern voice was the only thing she recognized about herself. She pushed the heavy swing door open with a bare foot and ran her hand through tangled hair, a finger catching in the white magnolia she clipped in last night. She unsnarled the tattered blood speckled flower and winced when she attempted to take a deep, calming breath.

And so that's how it gets into interaction with the cop.

Kate:                That was really interesting, because your first page of the screenplay has so much description. Like, I feel like you could have almost have just taken all of that description and just plopped it into a novel. But you totally change it. You know, you don't start with that, that wide, wide angle view of the mountains and then the town and then the car. 

William:          That’s an omniscient narrator, which is kind of frowned upon these days. So I started in Lenny's POV inside the car instead of outside the car. And that's what I mean by screenwriting is outside in and novel writing is inside out. 

Kate:                That's amazing. How that's, that, just reading those two really just shows that in, like, such stark contrast. That was really cool to just hear that. And you can just so see that. Yeah, thanks. Thank you. Definitely

Mindy:             That was a great illustration of how to transpose.

William:          It was interesting to, you know, just go page by page and work it in and then massage it wider and deeper. You know, that's kind of what the process was. 

Mindy:             How long did it take to move it from a screenplay to a novel? 

William:          All right. I didn't work on it, You know, constantly as I was doing my other day gig stuff, but two years, really, to get in into what I felt was... I always write toward whether it's a screenplay or a manuscript, something that is show-shape. Like, I wouldn't mind somebody reading this as opposed to being Oh, this is not ready. Right? So it was about a two year process. All told from the screenplay to the book. 

Kate:                Most listeners are aspiring writers. What would you say to someone who's listening and thinking? Ah, I always wanted to write a screenplay. You know, or Maybe I'll try that. I've tried writing novels. Maybe I'll try screenplays. Do you have any words of wisdom or our thoughts about that?

William:          Yes. Having you know, Been on the, on the mountain in both worlds. I would say that especially today with traditional filmmaking, the opportunity is a lot less because there's a lot less outlets. And, um, there's a lot more opportunity writing a book than there is a screenplay. And I would also say, Just generally, if you want to write, you know fiction and put your work out there, be prepared to deal with rejection. It's 99% rejection, but you only need the one. Yes, I've heard it said, And you know, some screenwriting podcast that what we do as writers, you know, whether it's in the book world or a screenwriting world is kind of insane. Really constantly Putting your heart out there and put your voice and put yourself out there, and you're constantly getting rejected, you know, for me, I have to write. Unless you have to write. Unless you have a story that is so powerful you're gonna have to believe and and stay with it for a long time. I would say Just go in it, you know, with your eyes open and be prepared for, You know, unless there's a lightning strike, it's it's gonna be It's gonna be a lot of work. 

Mindy:             It is a long haul. I don't know about Kate, but I have said to my listeners many, many times, even to get an agent. I was querying for 10 years, and I wrote my first novel... to get published was the fifth novel had ever written. I mean, it's a slog. It's really work. You gotta have, we call it rhinoceros skin, in the writing industry, you gotta have that rhinoceros skin and arrows have to bounce off of you.

Kate:                Yeah, For me, it was my third book that I found an agent and that was published and ah, it's totally difficulty and you have to slog through it. And you, definitely you become a better writer, The more you write. 

Mindy:             The book is called Someone to Watch Over by William Schreiber. It's compared to Where the Crawdads Sing and Sue Monk Kidd’s Secret Life of Bees, which, of course, are very well known, and it is available now. It released May 26 from Not A Pipe Publishing. Let the listeners know where they can find you online or on social media.

William:          My website is William Schreiber dot com, and I'm also on Goodreads at William Schreiber on Twitter is at Bill. Underscore Schreiber. 

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Indie Publishing A World War 2 Thriller Series: Glenn Dyer

Mindy: Welcome to Writer Writer Pants on Fire, where authors talk about things that never happened to people who don't exist. We also cover craft, the agent hunt, query trenches, publishing, industry, marketing and more. I'm your host, Mindy McGinnis. You can check out my books and social media at mindymcginnis dot com and make sure to visit the Writer Writer Pants on Fire blog for additional interviews, query critiques and more at WriterWriterPants on Fire.com

Mindy:             This summer I'm adding a co-host, fellow author Kate Karyus Quinn. We'll be doing a series that focuses on hybrid and indie authors. If you're thinking of going the Self Pub route we've got authors who found success with six figure sales, as well as authors who are just starting out on the road to indie publishing. Learn from them. Learn with us. Today's guest is Glenn Dyer author of the Conor Thorn Series 

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Mindy:             Glenn, I'm Mindy. I know you listen to the show. So hello. And Kate. Kate is my co host for our summer episodes.

Kate:                I invited myself on the show. 

Mindy:             She did. She completely invited herself. Do you wanna tell Glenn how that came about?

Kate:                I try to run Mindy's life, and sometimes she lets me. Um right now, I'm working on trying to get her to get a puppy.

Glenn:             Pet adoptions are through the roof right now.

Mindy:             Normally, I adopt from shelters, and you literally can't get a dog right now. 

Glenn:             Isn't that great news, huh?

Mindy:             It’s lovely, except my dog passed away right at the beginning of the epidemic. And I am a girl who's always had a dog. Grew up with dot multiple dogs, you know? And so I lost my dog. And I've been on a mission to get a dog. And there's been various mishaps that I've been sharing over some episodes here. But, Glenn, we're using your episode here in the summer series to talk with self-published an Indy published authors. I just want to mention your titles. You have The Torch Betrayal, it’s a world war 2 spy thriller. Your main character is called Conor Thorn. And then you also have... Don't you have a second title out? I was just looking...

Glenn:             Yes, Actually, it'll be out June 9th. It's called The Ultra Betrayal, second in the series. 

Mindy:             Very nice. Okay, so first question then, why did you decide to go the route that you went? Did you take a shot at traditional publishing and just decide it wasn't for you? Or did you always know that you wanted to go the indie route? 

Glenn:             What I took a shot at was, you know, the first step in the traditional publishing, and that was trying to, ah, get an agent interested in representing me. And ah, I gave that Ah, a number of months and I think I sent out close to 200 query letters. I got a fair amount of interest. Ah, and responses. Maybe 20 or so requests for either ah sample chapters or full manuscript. And I was hopeful in the beginning. But as time went on, you know, you have to admit that agents are looking for stories that they feel they can sell, obviously. And hopefully they know that there's a potential publisher that they're already aware of that likes the types of stories that they buy. I guess my story at that point in time just didn't feel like it was something that would be easy to sell. That's my interpretation of how things played out. I gave it a good, good go. Gave it enough time to percolate. Um, but one other factor made me decide to just move on from the process is the fact that, um, in my early sixties. I’ll be turning 67 this year. And I and I felt like, you know, I can't wait another year to find an agent and then have the agent possibly not be able to ah, get the book place with a publisher. So I just decided that, you know, I I'd like to get the story out there, see how people react to it.

I started my own company as the imprint and just ah, dove ah headfirst into the independent publishing business, and I found that it was, it was both exhilarating and also kind of scary because there's, there's a lot of moving parts to it. But the fact that I had given it a good try coupled with my age, I just said, All right, let's go, let's see what happens. And then, of course, I I think that, you know, if you have some success selling your titles, you know, you can always revisit the whole process of getting an agent. You can present reviews, you can present sales figures, and maybe that might convince somebody down the road. I haven't given it much thought lately because of, I’ve been so busy with launch of book two. But yeah, I think I gave it a try. And it was just Ah, I guess I got a little impatient and I just wanted to to get the book out there and see ah, what people thought of it. 

Kate:                I think that's a really great point that, um, traditional publishing can be a very long, slow process. It really moves at its own speed. I mean, you could spend a year or longer querying an agent. The second book I ever queried, actually, I went back and forth with an agent.  She was super, super nice. She gave me two R & R’s, where they asked you to revise and re submit to them. And she got on the phone with me. She gave me extensive notes. It was amazing. It was I mean, the time that she gave me was so good and so I actually ended up doing Two of those R&R’s for her. Two massive rewrites. In the time that this was going on, I had my second child. I made another human being over the length of this time.

And at the end of it, so nicely she said to me, I feel like I'm torturing you. And I think this book is not the one. And sometimes you have to go through this to get to the book that is the one. And at that point, I actually wasn't crushed because, um, I was already writing my third book, and that is the one that I ended up finding an agent for and getting published, but, you know, that was, that was a long, long time. And then, you know, you can be on submission with editors for years, and that can be so drawn out, and an editor might also ask you to revise, and then you could do revisions for them, and they could also still reject it. You know, the marketing people could be like that, for us, you know, we got too much of those or whatever. So and then, of course, once they buy your book is another year. So it is like such, it’s such a drawn out process. 

Mindy:             You're not the only person that I've talked to who decided to go the self publishing and the Indy route due to their age, and I don't think that it's a mistake. I mean, like Kate said, she was in the back and forth with just even trying to get an agent for a few years. I actually queried for 10 years before getting an agent. Partially, that's my own fault because I didn't know what I was doing, but yeah, I mean, you're not the only person I know that has made the decision due to age. 

Glenn:             If I was, you know, back in my thirties and I had started this process then I might have hung in there with it for a few more years because I must admit, I think that there's, ah, a bit of, ah, sense of pride that you were able to one, get an agent and two, get a deal with a ah publisher to put your book out. Think that would be a pretty good feeling. But yeah, I would have. I would have continued the process for a while longer if I was younger, but, yeah, age, age was definitely a major factor for me.

Mindy:             Kate, as a hybrid author do you want to drop any wisdom about the different levels of satisfaction you get from the different venues? 

Kate:                I agree with you. I do think that there is something about, you know, having an agent choose you and selling your book. That feels really, really good. But I think that people tend to focus on those 1st two hoops. And after you get an agent and then after the publisher, you know, fix your book and gives you money for it, then they publish it and then it's the biggest hoop and you have to get the audience to read it and you have to, you know, get people to discover it. I feel like that last part we put it last instead of thinking like, really, the readers are the most important thing, and I think publishers obviously have a lot of reach to reach readers, but they don't use that reach for every author. You know, some authors get a lot of marketing and some don’t. And there's no way to usually to know if you are going to get a lot. You know, for midlist authors, it's hard to break out.

And so, having switched to the Indies, I... not switched. I bounced back and forth. But on the idie side, I really like having more control and more levers to reach my audience and to play with price and to try different marketing strategies and to be able to see the numbers. And it's actually a little frustrating on my traditional side, like I'm like, I can't see how many books I'm selling. It's like I can't see all that stuff, like a curtain is drawn again. But I do think that there's some people who are always gonna be like Oh, you’re self published, which is why I actually prefer the term indie publishing.

Glenn:             Me too, yep. 

Kate:                Because indie publishing, is like this is a business, and I am taking it seriously, and I see this as a product and I have done it professionally. I think there needs to be more distinction through those. But obviously, you know, I was looking at your website. I was looking at your books. They look very professional. You have amazing reviews. Do you want to talk a little bit about getting those reviews? I saw you have a Kirkus Review. You have some big names, and that's a time consuming process.

Glenn:             Actually, I'll get into that. But I want to just say one thing. Kate, I think if you are a hands on person, I think independent publishing is great because, like you said, you you can look at your sales figures you can, you can kind of know where you are. I've heard stories about writers who just, they don't hear enough from their agent. They don't hear enough from their publisher and then just don't know what the heck is going on. So if you’re hands on this is definitely the way to go, But readers need help making decisions what to buy. My research about the whole independent publishing business is that reviews from readers, but also blurbs from other authors in the genre, Professional Review Services, who will give you an honest review. I just heard so much about how important they were. There's a bit of an investment, but that's OK. If you're serious about what you're doing, you have to invest in your endeavors.

As far as the reader reviews, I really worked very, very hard to get the reviews that I got. I should say the number of reviews that I got, um, to the point where I spent a lot of time trying to figure out who the reviewers were, who reviewed similar titles, I was able to use a Program called the book Review Targeter. I was able to scrape off a number of email addresses, and I spent days, day upon days over a long period of time of reaching out to people direct contact with them, asking them Would they mind reading my book and giving me an honest review? And, uh, you know, in some cases, I I actually had to, uh, send a book, but in in many cases, people were willing to, ah, purchase the book and give me a review, and I I really worked very, very hard at that because I learned the importance of honest reviews as far as helping people as they're running around Amazon trying to make a decision what they read next.

Kate:                That’s impressive. That sounds like so much work because even when you're traditionally published it it's so hard to get reviews. And I don't think you can go on Twitter and look at author tweets without at any time finding an author saying, If you want to thank an author whose work you love the best way is to leave a review! Like yeah, begging for reviews are part time job.

Mindy:             It is, and that's something that I have a blog post that I recycle just about once a year, and it's like 10 free ways to support the authors you love. And that's the number one thing is leave reviews and word of mouth. Word of mouth is a critical piece of how readers learn about books is from their friends and actual face to face conversations or tweets and text to Word of mouth, and there's no data for it, so it's not something you can quantify, but it is, to my mind, the most powerful recommendation machine. 

Now I want to ask because I'm looking at your reviews on here. One of the reasons that I thought you would be such a great guest on the show and Kate already touched on it a little bit is the reviews, but not really the reviews. With the quality of the reviewers she mentioned. You have, Kirkus, you also have a Book Life Review, which I want to ask about that. But you got Steve Berry. How did you get Steve Berry to review your book? 

Glenn:             First of all, there are a lot of people out there who hate to ask for things, and I'm definitely one of those. You just have to say I just have to do this. I also approached it with the attitude of Nothing ventured, Nothing gained. He writes thrillers, I’m writing historical thrillers, although you know, in a different time span. I ran into Barry at a Thriller fest convention in New York in 2017. I attended one of his ah seminars that were given over that weekend, and I found him to be very approachable I just said, You know, let's see if he'll respond. I sent him an email kind of reintroduced myself, and I told him I ran into him at Thriller Fest and I've written this book. Would he mind taking the time to read it and maybe give me a blurb? And I can't tell you how thrilling it was to get his email response saying Sure, Send it my way. I couldn't believe it. I sent it to him. He gave me a great blurb, and he's already read book two, and he's already given me a very nice solid blurb that I plan to use either on the front or back cover.

Who do I know? Who have I met? And if you can reach out to them with, It's sort of like a query letter for for a blurb, where you know there's something in it that's unique to that particular person, whether it's comments about their own works and how important their writing has been to your development, things along those lines. And as long as it sounds sincere and it's truthful, I mean, you know, you you got a good shot at getting a pretty good response. I just sent out a request to another writer today who I really love. And he writes World War, Two mysteries, murder mysteries. He responded right away and said, Yeah, sure, send it my way and you never know until you ask. And if you do it in a proper way, respectful, etcetera. Uh, I think you'd be surprised at how many writers out there want to help other writers. 

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Mindy:             Very true, a lot of writers Do want to help other authors. I am constantly receiving blurb requests, and I've had to recently just say that I'm unable because I literally can't read them fast enough. But if it's a debut, I will always say Yes, and let me look at it because they need all the help they can get. I want to add the fact that because you had that personal introduction of saying I met you at Thriller Fest, I'm sure that that helped you get the foot in the door to have Steve Berry go, Yeah, sure, I'll take a look at it because number one, as you said, like a query letter, it has a personal touch to it, but also you're showing Steve Barry that you're serious enough about your writing, that you're going to cons, and that matters. 

Glenn:             I couldn't agree more. I think it really does. I think we can all get a sense when somebody's not very sincere or and I think that that is a big part of it. I don't know what you both think of this, but the advice that you should attend at least one major publishing conference a year or workshop or something makes a lot of sense because the contacts you make, not only can they help you, but you might be in a position to help somebody else out. And I think that's just good karma when you feel like you can give back whether it's helping them out, figuring you know, how to best market their books or tell me about your newsletters, your newsletters are great. You know, what can I do for mine? And so on and so forth? Giving back makes a great deal of sense.

Mindy:             It does. And on the other end of that, as a published author, I say yes to everything. I'll do things for free. If people will cover my flights, I will sometimes even if I have enough miles on, I’ll just fly myself to wherever the con is. If they're asking me to be on a panel or whatever because of this, and Kate can back me up whenever we go anywhere and Kate or our mutual friend Dimitria is with us. They'll be like, Can you introduce us to so And so, do you know them? And most of the time, yeah, I do. Just because I do so much stuff sometimes on my own dime that networking is invaluable even when you're on the other side.

Glenn:             Without a doubt, I'm a big believer in that. In my prior career in broadcasting going to conventions two or three times a year where you can pull somebody aside and say, your stations really doing great. Your ratings for your newscasts are off the charts. It wasn't always that way. What's the secret? What did you focus on? I mean, those kinds of conversations and interactions are invaluable. You can't put a price tag on. 

Kate:                Especially, I think, though, for writers because we are so solitary. And to be able to make connections with other writers and other authors who maybe are in the position to mentor you. Or maybe they're, you know, on the same place on the writing journey as you, and you kind of have, you know, someone to walk along that road with and compare notes, and it's really rewarding. At this point, I’ve been writing with the goal of publications since, 07 and a lot of the early people who I met actually online. I didn't actually go to any conferences until I was published and went as like a published author because I just I had two small Children and I couldn't afford that. You know, I met lots of people online, and now almost all those people they’re published, You know, some of them are really successful indie authors. Some of them are published traditionally, and it's really cool to see, like how everybody has grown from being, you know, on these message boards, asking other people to read their query letters. To, this is their career now.

Mindy:             Kate, I wanted you, if we could circle back to reviews one last time, you also have a Book Life Review for your title. So if you could explain what Book Life is for the listeners. And then, if you and Glenn either one of you have anything to say about whether you thought it helped with exposure, etcetera.

Kate:                I got a Book Life Review for my first Indy title that I published which Was a contemporary romance romcom. The Show Must Go On. I just actually found out that the audio book is out now, which is very exciting. Audible picked it up for audio and produced it. I submitted it to Publishers Weekly and You can submit it. You can either like pay them to get a review, for sure. Or you can just be like please review my book. It's really good, and they might pick it or they might not. It was kind of a process they like, sent me an email. They were like, Your book is being considered and I was like a in the small print at the bottom. It's like, but this does not guarantee you a review. And then there was, like another email. I think that was like someone's reading your book. Then at the bottom, it's like, but this does not guarantee a review. And so I'm like, OK, don't get your hopes up and then they posted a review and it was a really good review, and it went into The Publisher's Weekly has like a Book Life section.

Mindy:             Yeah, it was in the print version of Publishers Weekly, which is, I would think, pretty good boost as far as visibility. Of course, visibility doesn't always translate into sales.

Kate:                It boosted my paperback sales. My e book is Amazon exclusive because it's in the Kindle Unlimited program, but paperback is wide so you can buy it at any bookstore that sells books, I think it boosted my paperback sales for quite a few months. Not like huge like I just had some sales instead of, um, you know, zero. And this is a book that my agent gave me feedback on it. It went out on sub, came really close. A bunch of times editors liked it, and then it kept dying. And so it died in acquisitions. I think like three or four times. 

Glenn:             It’s so tough to nail that down. You know, I think there's so many factors that come into play to pinpoint one review, or even one promotion is very difficult, although I will say that I first time out, and there's a lot of luck involved in this, and I think I feel very fortunate. I applied for a Book Bub promotion, and I know that those are very hard to get. And I can tell you that was responsible for a ton of sales over a period of 3 to 4 weeks.

So some things you can really point to to get back to the Book Life and Publisher’s Weekly. I think there are certain names that carry a lot of weight with people in the publishing business. And, I think readers to Publishers Weekly and the counterpart Book Life, Kirkus. After that, you've got a New York Times Book Review or Washington Post Book Review. Some of the bigger periodicals or newspapers Some of those really turn a lot of heads, and if you're lucky enough to get a decent review from those sources, It does legitimize your presence out there amongst all the books that are competing for attention. 

Mindy:             The other thing that I think definitely legitimizes you is your cover because your cover is strong. Did you find a designer to do this for you? 

Glenn:             As we all know, covers are so critical. I don't know exactly how I stumbled upon this, but in doing research online, I came across Joanna Pen, who ah, is a very successful entrepreneur writer, has sold a lot of both fiction and nonfiction books. Nonfiction books, you know, primarily centers around the publishing business. One of her fiction books cover really stood out to me. I bought the book and you find out whether in the acknowledgements are on the copyright page who designed the cover? And so I reached out to that person, and I've been working with her for a couple of years now. She's actually based in Scotland. She's really talented, willing to listen to your ideas, easy to work with. I really like the first cover, and the second cover is, you know, because it's a Series, there's a lot of similarities to it, sort of feel like I again got lucky and stumbled upon somebody who is really good at what they do. And I know that there's a lot of writers who struggle with, uh the working relationship with their graphic designer, and, you know, they go back and forth and there's 15, 20 different versions of a cover, and they just can't seem to get the one that they both like. And nailing a cover down for these two books was was so, so easy. Her name is Jane Dixon Smith, and she does a great job and and, by the way, Mindy, I'm looking right now at your cover for Be Not Far from Me, and that's a great cover, and you've got some other covers that really stand out, too. 

Mindy:             I’ve been incredibly fortunate. The same designer, the same book cover artist has done all of my books that are from Katherine Teagan and Harper Collins. I had a different one for my Penguin books. But for all of my Harper books, which are, seven of my nine releases are the same designer, which is pretty amazing when you see the pretty wide expanse of genre and design style. Same Woman doing all of that. She's really good. Her name's Erin Fitzsimmons, and you're right. I know a lot of ah, lot of authors who do goes back and forth and back and forth.

Typically in the traditional world, we don't have a lot of control over our covers. I am very fortunate and that I have a great working relationship with both my editor and my cover designer, and we will all three of us and my agent as well, look at it and say, Well, what do we think? And they listen to my feedback partially because it was a librarian for 14 years, so I don't react emotionally. I'm not going to say Well, the cover is purple and I don't like the color purple. If purple is what is in right now in design- because it does go in waves in YA. Then put a purple cover on it, if that's going to sell it, I don't care like I can be practical about it.

Something else that I wanted to ask you about. One of the reasons I think is interesting to have you as a guest here is because historicals are kind of, they can be a tougher sell. There's a great joke in traditional publishing that got very old for me very quickly. Is that historically historicals don't sell, And I always found that so amusing? Every time I pitch another historical, I would be like just get the joke out of the way and then we can move on. And when we talk about self publishing, indie publishing a book, publishing the big sellers categories is romance... Kate that what's the What's the 2nd one? It's romance and is it mystery?

Kate:                I think, romance, thrillers, sci fi. I think all those genres. I think genre fiction is what does really well. I think there is room for historical. I know in traditional a lot of times, you know, you hear a World War Two books are overcrowded, It's very competitive. I think readers love them like, you know, That's why there's a lot of them. Yeah, there's always a World War two book on the top of the charts. It's kind of one of those book conundrums were It's like, Well, there's too many of them but people love them, So maybe we should keep giving those books to people.

Mindy:             That's kind of what I'm curious to ask you about. How do you find your readers? Then, when you're in this kind of a sliver of readership, that's going to be reading cause... another thing that I want to say, which I don't know if it's blanket true, but I know that it is true for in most cases, like paranormal romance and stuff like that. Readers that buy traditional books and that go to bookstores and browse and readers that are indie readers that are searching for e books and 99 cent buys, typically is a different demographic. Indie readers typically aren't traditionally published readers as well. You you don't always see both, and you don't get a lot of cross over. So I'm just curious. How do you find readers that are indie readers that are e book readers when you're in the World War two thriller category? 

Glenn:             That's a very difficult question to answer, because, to be honest, I I'm not sure that I've perfected any kind of a process in that regard. I think there's a lot of ah, let's try this. Let's try that being ah, active in online forums that specialize or focus on World War two, there's a ah Facebook group, Second World War Authors that I'm a part of. I've also tried to, with some advertising, reach out to a specific group of people interested in World War Two history by advertising in a magazine called World War Two History. So, I've tried, I've tried a lot of you know, different things and just as I said before, So it's Sometimes it's so difficult to figure out what's working as reaching out to readers. You could have like 45 things going at once. You could have Series of BookBub and Amazon ads. You could have also gotten into Facebook ads. Maybe you've increased Perma-frees or other incentives to get people to sign up and buy your books. I don't know if I have a specific formula there. Except that you sort of need to try a bunch of different things and trust your gut and maybe get a clear of feel as possible as to what's resonating.

There are people who like the subject of World War Two, but they don't want to read any fictional stories about it, right? You need books about battles and campaigns and biographies of generals, etcetera. Then there are people who don't want to read nonfiction about the war. They just want to read fictional stories. Then you've got World War two love stories, and then you've got books that describe fictional characters in big actual battles. So it's really a tough tough thing to zero in on. You just got to try a bunch of different things to find those readers. If you've got some data that campaigns produce, it's it's a matter of sticking your nose into it and trying to come to some conclusions. That's probably the toughest part of of being an indie author is you sort of have to build up your own expertise. It can take some time.

Kate:                Can I ask about... you’re involved in some Facebook groups, where people like World War Two and talk about it are those... So I've kind of looked for Facebook groups, and there seems to be, um, two different types. One is a group where it's it's really people talking about the thing they like. It's you know, readers talking to other readers mostly looked for like romance based ones or fantasy ones. Then there's other kind where it is just people pimping their books. It is just buy my book, buy my book, buy my book, and then I sometimes am posting those, and I think to myself every single person in this group is just an author trying to sell their book. It's just shouting at other authors Buy my Book! 

Glenn:             To that point, there are some groups out there that have, ah, you know, a certain set of rules as to what's appropriate, Acceptable. You're allowed one announcement for a new book a year because they don't want it just to be a self promotional kind of website. The intent with a lot of these groups is to, you know, provide guidance and answer my questions. And ah, lot of these groups say yes, okay, if you've just read a book about World War Two that, you really enjoy, sure, mention it here. Certainly acceptable, but and even those groups go only so far as to help you get established and get the word out. 

Kate:                Do you try and go into those groups as like, as a reader, as a lover of World War Two, which I assume you must be Do you try and just organically just doing conversations and get into the group that way?

Glenn:             I think that, um, yeah, you could certainly be very passive and just, you know, read everybody else's posts. But getting back to the giving back concept, If you've read a great book, let people know about it. That’s what I used groups for a lot. I ask questions that help me put stories together. I'm having trouble finding research about a specific period of time in Italy during the war. I've had a devil of the time finding books or anything online, so I want to use the forum to say, Hey, I need some help here and I think that's where they provide a very valuable service so they don't necessarily help you find readers. But, you know, maybe after a while your name becomes familiar to people. You could say I'm researching my next book that's called X, and I could use some help, you know, maybe eventually it pays out at some point. But I think asking for advice with independent publishing there's so many moving parts. If somebody out there can save you from making a mistake, will be saved a lot of time, and maybe some money eliminated some frustration, so some of those groups are very helpful. In that way.

Mindy:             It could be difficult, like Kate was saying. Sometimes it not only Facebook groups, I mean, sometimes Twitter just feels like all of us linking to our books constantly. I've backed off from social media lately just because I'm worn out. I don't know how much it actually helps. You just hit a point where you're kind of done and I also because of the pandemic. We're recording this at the end of April. I have lost so many events a lot of the time being around other people in talking to other people is what actually gets me, like I get my energy from others. So, like, I have nothing to tweet about right now. I’ve got cat hair on my socks. Do you really care? Probably not. That's not a pretty Instagram photo.

Glenn:             I think that's a big fear of mine. Is that at some point I’m worried that people are gonna go, geez, not another tweet from this guy. I really worry about that. And ah, I'm very tempted to to sort of do the same thing that you're doing, Mindy, which is just sort of backing off it for a while and making sure you're not, so to speak, over staying your welcomes.

Mindy:             I think best practice is to just be sure that you're not just using whatever the platform is, So let's say Twitter like if I get on Twitter- because that's a big one for me. If I get on Twitter, I don't just get on and post, you know, I a scroll through my feed and I see what other people are saying and I'll respond and I ask questions. You know, when things like that, if you're doing that, if you're actually interacting with community, it's different than just bopping and being like my book is 0.99 today! The pros and cons of social media could be debated until we are all dead. Which will probably be sooner than we would like. 

Kate:                I think we should leave it there. We’ll be dead sooner than we’d like. Thanks for talking to us! That was a great show! 

Mindy:             I think that’s true at any point, right? Like it's not just the pandemic. Like you're probably not gonna be ready when it’s time to go.

Glenn:             I’m sure that will be the case. You're right. 

Kate:                That’s a great sign off, Mindy.

Mindy:             Thanks. I worked hard on that. We’re all gonna die. Probably sooner than you’d like. Tune in next week. Maybe.

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