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Actress Lena Callaway once held Hollywood in her hands like a glass of fizzing champagne – until the day she disappeared, and dragged her daughter, Bryn, with her. This is a good hook! I would suggest some indication of Bryn's age at this time - child? teen?
Now, four years later, Bryn resides in her childhood town – Belle Falls – caring for a reclusive, unstable Lena and desperately trying to avoid notice. Why? Is her mother's sudden vacating of Hollywood a big story? When you say disappeared do you mean like people literally don't know where she is, or is more like a ghosted situation? But when she begins to glimpse eerie woodland spirits through the trees – the first sign of the legendary curse upon the Callaway women – and Lena’s former best friend, famous director Ada James, comes knocking, Bryn is forced into a situation she’s dreaded since her mother’s first movie released: the spotlight. What does Ada want? What is the situation that is going to force her into the spotlight?
Upon threat of revealing Lena and Bryn’s location to the press – and the reason why Lena fled Hollywood – Bryn agrees to Ada’s proposal: return to New York, promote Ada’s new film, and play along to the attention with a smile on her face. Only, the film is about Lena herself, and Bryn is forced to work with Eamon, Ada’s begrudging son who is slipping under her skin in a concerning manner. So... there's a movie being made, and Ada is in it even though she's not stable? Is Ada the one doing the publicity, or Brynn?
But Bryn has a plan. Ada might have a chain around her neck, and fans may be clamouring for her and Lena’s secrets, but Bryn is determined to tell their story from her own lips, defy Ada James and her manipulative film at every turn, and protect her mother from slipping further into insanity.
That is, if the curse doesn’t claim her first. What does the curse have to do with anything? There's only one mention of it, and then it's your closer. Is it the reason she left Hollywood? The reason her sanity is a problem? Clarification is needed as to how the Hollywood angle and the paranormal angle work together.
The Unmaking of June Farrow by Adrienne Young meets The Seven Husbands of Evelyn Hugo by Taylor Jenkins Reid in A SMALL AFFAIR, a standalone YA magical realism novel with crossover potential. Perfect for fans of Ann Liang and Kelly Andrew, A SMALL AFFAIR is complete at 84,000 words.
I read this whole thing as if it was an adult narrative, becuase Brynn's age isn't clarified in the beginning. Your query is pretty strong, you just need to tie the paranormal element to the real world element more clearly, and establish early on that this is YA.